13:3113:31, 25 April 2024diffhist+176
Tucson Electric Power
No need to mention non-notable author in the body of the article, they are mentioned in the ref. Use cite news instead cite web.current
23:0723:07, 19 April 2024diffhist+39
Burt Alvord
→Legacy: No need to mention non-notable author in the body of the article, they are credited in the ref. Use cite news instead of a raw ref.current
21:0321:03, 19 April 2024diffhist+44
Fred Enke
Use cite news instead of an external link. No need to mention a non-notable author in the body of the article.current
00:1000:10, 2 March 2024diffhist0
Western Pacific Railroad
Undid revision 1211289930 by
2601:380:8380:9780:3956:998:6C4C:3456 (
talk) rv well intentioned edit. The WP ending in 1982 or 83 could be debated, but the article says "In 1982, the Western Pacific was acquired by the Union Pacific Corporation and it was soon merged into the Union Pacific Railroad." To supper 1983, add a source.currentTag: Undo
1 March 2024
20:4420:44, 1 March 2024diffhist−133
Hughes Aircraft Company
→Post–World War II: No need to mention an author and their publication in the body, it is covered in the reference. Updated reference page numbers, see https://www.newspapers.com/article/arizona-daily-star-tuscons-biggest-manu/142461224/Added
Template:When for whether the plant is still in operation.
05:1005:10, 1 March 2024diffhist−294
Raytheon Missiles & Defense
Author David Leighton is not "noted" as he does not have a Wikipage. Moved one self-published book down to Further reading section. This book is probably not
WP:RS. Removed "he Falcon's Nest: The Hughes Missile Plant in Tucson, 1947–1960" as it cannot be found on Google Books, Google Scholar nor Worldcat.
16:1116:11, 27 February 2024diffhist+283
Jim Keith
Added Citation needed for place of birth and origin. Findagrave is not acceptable, see
WP:FINDAGRAVE-EL. I looked in newspapers.com and could not find support for these items. Added page to September 28th RGJ article.