15:1515:15, 24 April 2024diffhist+185
Delta Air Lines
This editing exercise emphasizes the importance of providing a holistic view of the services offered. It shows how adding a summary sentence can encapsulate the overall intention behind service features, thereby enhancing reader understanding. Through this process, I've learned the value of concise yet comprehensive descriptions in conveying the full spectrum of amenities and their intended impact on the customer experience.Tags: RevertedVisual edit
15:0315:03, 24 April 2024diffhist+251
United Airlines
This editing process has highlighted the importance of enhancing the context of informational content to make it more comprehensive. By adding details about the benefits and operational improvements of the new technology, the information becomes more useful and impactful for the reader. This teaches the value of making technical advancements relatable and clearly outlining their practical benefits.Tag: Visual edit
23:4023:40, 23 April 2024diffhist+258
LVMH
Adding context to factual statements enhances comprehension and engagement for the reader. By detailing the extent of the Arnault Family Group's involvement in LVMH, the information becomes more than a statistic; it tells a story of family influence and control in a major global company. This process emphasizes the importance of not just presenting data, but also explaining its implications in a clear and accessible manner.currentTag: Visual edit
23:3523:35, 23 April 2024diffhist+26
Make Up For Ever
Using reputable sources such as LVMH (Moët Hennessy Louis Vuitton), a well-known luxury goods company, or citing individuals like Dany Sanz, founder of Make Up For Ever, lends authority to the content. It shows the reader that the information is backed by entities or individuals with a significant presence and expertise in their respective fields.currentTag: Visual edit
23:2223:22, 23 April 2024diffhist+175
Well-woman examination
This editing process emphasizes the importance of being thorough and clear when describing medical procedures. It's crucial to provide detailed, step-by-step explanations that can aid in understanding both the how and the why behind clinical assessments. Including the rationale behind each step of a procedure not only educates but also helps in setting patient expectations, which can alleviate anxiety and promote a cooperative patient-clinician relationship. By elaborating on each component ofcurrentTag: Visual edit
23:1423:14, 23 April 2024diffhist+193
Pre-conception counseling
From this editing process, I've learned how important it is to clearly articulate health-related information, especially when it pertains to complex topics such as pregnancy and family history risks. Enhancing clarity and completeness helps ensure that the reader understands the full scope of the risks and can take appropriate preventive measures. Adding specific suggestions like counseling and screening emphasizes actionable steps, making the information not only informative but also practical.currentTag: Visual edit
01:1901:19, 7 April 2024diffhist−120
Advertising
This edit updates the Wikipedia entry on the history of newspapers in the United States during the early 19th century. It highlights the significant role of advertising in driving the growth of newspapers during this period. The edit aims for objectivity and neutrality, providing a concise summary of the information provided.Tags: RevertedVisual edit
01:1301:13, 7 April 2024diffhist−502
Google
This edit updates the Wikipedia entry on Google's energy usage. It includes Google's disclosure in September 2011 regarding its energy consumption, along with information on the sources of electricity for data centers and carbon emissions. The edit aims for objectivity and neutrality, summarizing and organizing the provided information appropriately.Tags: RevertedVisual edit
01:3701:37, 31 March 2024diffhist+500
Artificial intelligence
This edition preserves information about the place of Asimov's laws in discussions of machine ethics and how AI researchers think about these laws, while adding depth and complexity by providing specific criticisms, such as the ambiguity of the laws. In addition, it avoids specific categorization of the "Multivac series", since Asimov's three laws are not limited to this series, but run through many of his works.Tags: RevertedVisual edit