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Removed Los Angeles, San Diego and San Francisco from Mormon settlements

Because they aren't Mormon settlements. Each was founded by Franciscan missionaries decades before the Mormon church even existed! To say otherwise smacks of POV Purpleback pack 89≈≈≈≈ 23:22, 24 October 2011 (UTC) reply

The wording states "significant role in establishing and settling communities"; as I indicated in my last edit summary, significant role doesn't mean first, primary, or exclusive. -- 208.81.184.4 ( talk) 23:37, 24 October 2011 (UTC) reply
Even with the wording as is, it's both misleading and not born about by reliable primary sources. And inaccurate, since each of those communities had existed for decades before the Mormons arrived. Purpleback pack 89≈≈≈≈ 23:40, 24 October 2011 (UTC) reply
OK, from your perspective, was the arrival of the Mormon Battalion significant to the history of LA? How about the arrival of the Brooklyn in SF? -- 208.81.184.4 ( talk) 00:10, 25 October 2011 (UTC) reply
Not particularly in either case, and certainly not to the establishment and settlement of those communities. Reading the articles you linked, it seems apparant that the majority of both the Brooklyn and the Batallion did not stay in LA or San Francisco for more than a couple of years. If there was such a significant Mormon influence in those two cities, why did it take until the 1920s for stakes to be established there? And why should they be mentioned in the establishment and settlement if they didn't arrive until decades after the cities were founded? Purpleback pack 89≈≈≈≈ 00:17, 25 October 2011 (UTC) reply
To answer the question "why did it take until the 1920s", the reason is because until then, Mormons pretty much all gathered into Utah. It was, in fact, around 1920 when they started to migrate out of Utah. The trend was accelerated by the Great Depression, as Mormons looked for work wherever they could find it. They went to places like Los Angeles, San Francisco, Portland, and Seattle. All of this can be found on page 105 of Richard Bushman's Mormonism: a very short introduction if you're looking for a source. -- Adjwilley ( talk) 01:15, 25 October 2011 (UTC) reply
But by the 1920s, the three cities in question had already been established and settled; and therefore shouldn't be listed here Purpleback pack 89≈≈≈≈ 03:29, 25 October 2011 (UTC) reply
As long as the article text continues to describe LDS involvement in these communities, I'm not going to argue about inclusion/exclusion of those 3 continuities on the list; it's just not worth the digital ink. -- 208.81.184.4 ( talk) 17:07, 11 November 2011 (UTC) reply
Mormons formed substantial communities when bands of settlers from Utah arrived in Southern California in waves from 1852 to the late 1890's, not intentionally as permanent residents and/or had limited contact with the nearest stakes and temples in Utah. The Mormons whom arrived in L.A. during the 1870's Land Rush of Southern California as many Mormons then tend to live in the district of Lincoln Heights and San Francisco (esp. Oakland in their neighborhood called "Brooklyn" before 1900) have contributed to the development of these cities to become thriving urban areas, involved in establishment of businesses as well churches and/or community organization of Mormons wherever there wasn't a church around. The Sierra Nevadas (i.e. Donner Pass, Colfax Pass and Mother Lode Country region facing the San Joaquin Valley), the High Desert (i.e. Mono Lake, Owens Valley and the San Bernardino colony in the Mojave Desert) and the foothills of San Diego was known for small settlements and farming properties by the Mormon settlers in the late half of the 19th century. In L.A. the Mormons are involved in the growth of towns like Watts and Inglewood; and Mormon wards are numerous in some of these small towns and areas around Barstow and Temecula to have higher ratio of Mormons per population to include them as part of the Mormon Corridor. 71.102.21.238 ( talk) 09:24, 23 July 2012 (UTC) reply
But L.A., San Francisco, and San Diego were not founded by the Mormons, and have always been composed of mostly non-Mormons, so they don't belong p b p 16:24, 23 July 2012 (UTC) reply
The article text simply says, "had a significant role in establishing and settling communities". Requiring that the communities be "founded" by Mormons is setting the bar pretty high. ~ Adjwilley ( talk) 18:47, 23 July 2012 (UTC) reply
"Had a significant role in establishing and settling communities" is too vague. Founding a community, while a high benchmark, is a clear one. Consider this: the Methodists established the second church in Los Angeles (after the Catholics) and the second church in Whittier (after the Quakers). But since the Catholics and Quakers had a much, much greater impact on Los Angeles and Whittier, whether or not the Methodists had a significant role is debatable. So to is it debatable as to how significant a role the Mormons had in the founding and setting of Los Angeles, San Francisco and San Diego...as repeatedly noted, all three have always been predominantly non-Mormon. p b p 22:42, 23 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Of course, pbp. Each religious, ethnic group and social demographics are involved in city foundation. But some are more prevalent or more renowned than others, like the case of the Irish in Boston, the Jews as an ethnoreligious group in New York, GLBT people in San Francisco and so on. The Mormons of Cal. are over-represented in ratio of their population, even though the state's 3 largest cities aren't originally Mormon settlements to begin with. Sensational reporting I call it, in part of the LDS church's support of the anti-same sex marriage initiative Prop. 8 back in 2008 was originally passed by the majority of Californian voters, and the current Republican presidential candidate Mitt Romney tries to woo in votes in the nation's most populous state. Mike D 26 ( talk) 10:28, 26 July 2012 (UTC) reply

This thread is about the founding of these cities. This is WP:NOTAFORUM, so please don't go off topic into 21st century politics when we're talking about the 19th century. 72Dino ( talk) 15:57, 26 July 2012 (UTC) reply
My apologies, 72Dino. "Colonies" of Mormons, Jehovah's Witnesses and Seventh-Day Adventists ( Loma Linda, Cal.) by settlers from Utah (Mormons) are part of the history of late 19th century era Los Angeles, with the rest of Southern California known for being a hub of Restorationist religious Movements in American Christianity.

I can't find really enough information on Bing, Google and Yahoo in regards to the settlement of the Morongo Basin in the High Desert (California) of San Bernardino County relating to (not limited to) Mormon pioneers in the late 19th century period on a road known as "Utah Trail" or two split forks Adobe Road and Bagdad Highway, from the National Trails Highway (US route 66 replaced by Interstate 40) to the North to the Twentynine Palms Highway (State Route 62), but the "trail" named for Utah was replaced by Amboy Road in the 1920's.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Twentynine_Palms#History - Checked the article paragraph on the history of Twentynine Palms.

It has been settled: Mormons never officially established the state's largest cities, therefore it should not be readmitted again. Mike D 26 ( talk) 00:45, 29 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Chart

What does everyone think of including a chart for membership ( from here), instead of a table? Or we can even display them side-by-side, like this:

Year LDS Membership
1846 230
1920 3,800
1930 21,254
1940 44,800
1950 102,000
1960 217,600
1970 349,000
1980 541,000
1991 721,000
1999 740,000
2008 755,747
2012 777,061

The only problem with it is that the data points aren't equal, so the membership growth is a little skewed. Any thoughts? — Frεcklεfσσt | Talk 03:24, 6 July 2013 (UTC) reply

The Chart's fine and could be added. I don't see any objection. Dmm1169 ( talk) 18:27, 15 July 2013 (UTC) reply

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