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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to eventually nominate it for FA. This article has already had a peer review and recently passed GA. I would appreciate suggestions on how to make it more comprehensive and how to improve the prose.
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Benny the mascot (
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I am sorry this is taking me so long - will review in the next 24 hours. Sorry,
Ruhrfisch
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- No need to rush...I have
other ways of keeping myself busy. :) Good luck on your FAC, by the way.
Benny the mascot (
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Ruhrfisch comments: Thanks for being so understanding - this looks pretty good to me, so here are some mostly nit-picky suggestions for improvement.
- One thing that is sometimes hard to do is to
provide context to the reader about things the author is familiar with. I am fairly familiar with the Chicago area, but was not that sure where Lisle was. A brief description would help (x miles west of the Loop / downtown Chicago) or a map with a dot would help too.
- I also was confused by mentions of the college, but no real resolution on what happened to it - it took me a little searching here, but I assume it is what is now known as
Benedictine University in Lisle. The article mentions the university as the site of buildings The St. Procopius monks decided on March 12, 1900, to build a new college[20] on the site of present-day Benedictine University at the southwest corner of Maple and College Avenues.[12], and in terms of a scholarship at the academy, but I think it needs to explicitly say what happened to the college after the academy split. I realize that this article on the Academy, so it need not be a lot of detail, but some is needed.
- The map is nice, but I am guessing the Census does not show buildings (only streets and water), so the source for those needs to be given explicitly - this will be checked at FAC.
- The capitalization of College and Academy by themselves seems a bit odd, though it is done consistently as far as I can tell. The
Wikipedia:MOS#Institutions says if it is the generic word (college, academy) by itself it should not be capitalized.
- The lead just seems sparse to me - especially the second and third paragraphs. My rule of thumb is to make sure every header is in the lead somehow - are Demographics and the Christmas Drive there?
- I mentioned the Christmas Drive a little bit, but the Demographics section is already somewhat covered in the lead. ("Benet's average ACT test score has exceeded statewide and national averages, and more than 99 percent of students have gone on to college after graduation")
- The language is decent but I noticed a few rough spots reading - I will try and come back and point some more out soon, here is one to start
- Classes began on March 2, when Rev. Procopius Neuzil taught two remedial high school students in two small rooms at 704 Allport Street for four months. FOur months in one day? Wow that's concentrated teaching! Perhaps Classes began on March 2, and for the next four months Rev. Procopius Neuzil taught two remedial high school students in two small rooms at 704 Allport Street. would be better. I am also not sure students can be remedial - I thought classes were? Could be wrong
- Sentence replaced with a small revision regarding the usage of "remedial".
Benny the mascot (
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Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at
Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). I do not watch peer reviews, so if you have questions or comments, please contact me on my talk page. Yours,
Ruhrfisch
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- Thanks for your feedback!
Benny the mascot (
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- More from Ruhrfisch
I will try to point out language that needs work here, as well as any other issues that I notice
- Lead It was founded in 1887 as the all-boys St. Procopius College and Academy by Benedictine monks in Chicago, who also operated the St. Joseph Bohemian Orphanage, which along with St. Procopius later moved to Lisle, approximately 25 miles (40 km) west of Chicago.[6] Could this sentence be split into two? As it is now it is quite long and complex - I would start the new sentence after the word orphanage. Also could the year(s) for the move(s) to Lisle be added to provide context?
- Capitalization of college? The orphanage closed in 1956 to make room for St. Procopius Academy, which then separated from the College in 1957. (In Internet Explorer you can search for a word and it highlights all the matching terms in yellow - might be worth checking caps on college and academy this way)
- Tweak sentence Sacred Heart merged with St. Procopius Academy in 1967
on the St. Procopius campus to establish Benet Academy [on the St. Procopius campus].
- Also, any idea where the name "Benet" came from? a ha -
here it says Benet is an English form of Benedict
- Unclear Benet's performing arts program stages multiple musicals ... I think it would be clearer to say Benet's performing arts program stages a musical annually... perhaps saying since when
- Need to be consistent on names - in the text it is "Reverend John Nepomucene Jaeger of the Order of St. Benedict..." but the image caption is just "Abbot Nepomucene Jaeger" (no John). I also wonder since St
John of Nepomuk is not well known in the US, if a link would be in order?
- Suggested reoganization Reverend John Nepomucene Jaeger of the Order of St. Benedict was the pastor of the parish[.]
, which served approximately 16,000 to 20,000 parishioners. Chicago at that time had the largest Czech population of any other city in the world outside of Prague and Vienna. Roughly 50,000 Czech immigrants were served by the three Czech parishes of Chicago, which included [16,000 to 20,000 parishioners at] St. Procopius.
- The source says they were teaching high school classes then, so I would clarify that in Only a two-year [high school] program was offered at the time; the college offered its first four-year high school program in 1904.[9]
- Might flow more smoothly as
The first Bohemian abbot in the United States, Abbot Jaeger[, the first Bohemian abbot in the United States,] founded a Bohemian monastic community in 1894...
- What does better atmosphere mean? The college and academy continued to grow in Chicago; in 1896 the Abbey bought the 104-acre (42 ha) Morris Neff farm in Lisle to gain more space and a better atmosphere.[9] Cleaner air than in the city?
- Since I am assuming that the present Benedictine University still is on the site because they are the re-named St Procopius College, I think that needs to be made clearer in this: The St. Procopius monks decided on March 12, 1900, to build a new college[21] on the site of present-day Benedictine University at the southwest corner of Maple and College Avenues.[13]
- OK I am stopping the rough spots here. I think this would benefit from a copy edit before FAC. There are a few other things I noticed:
- What makes
Remembering Lisle a reliable source? See
WP:RS
- The alt text for the mascot should desribe it as a bird, not a redwing (there might be those who think of the
Detroit Redwings or even
Red Wing Shoes
Hope this helps,
Ruhrfisch
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- Thanks for your advice! I've fixed most of the issues you've brought up; I just need to get that copyedit completed.
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- Comment: If editors of this article wish to keep it, they may want to cite some secondary sources, as the article's only current source is a primary source from the lake's website.
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- Keep The article could have a better career section, but I have heard about Dr Vandyck outside of WP for her academic career, and believe from this that she is notable. Probably meets
WP:NACADEMIC at least if someone can collect sources on her publications.
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- Delete: There are a number of sources about the subject, but all centre around (what they see as) her unusual name. Vandyck's research has not yet made significant impact in her discipline to meet
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- Agreed that most articles focus on her name in some way, but there are other Wikipedia articles with that kind of focus, like
Place names considered unusual. Not sure why coverage for that aspect would be necessarily less legitimate.
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- Delete. No pass of
WP:Prof with zero cites of GS. Not enough achievement yet for
WP:GNG.
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- Redirect and lightly merge to
Naming in the United States. I'm seeing a single source from 2009, and a flurry of sources from 2019, all human interest stories about the unusual name. This looks like a
WP:BLP1E to me.
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- Delete. Per
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WP:Prof and no pass of GNG. --
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- Keep: Article is notable in my opinion, but could benefit from more sources.
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WP:ANYBIO.
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- Delete: I don't find book reviews, so not passing AUTHOR. No mentions in media that i can find, what's now used for sourcing in the article is primary or linked to paper sources that I can't locate online.
Oaktree b (
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- If you need reviews for the books, they are in the Amazon postings of the books. I may not be a Wikipedia expert, but I do know that Judith has, in fact, written these books. If you want to look her up as an author in general:
https://www.amazon.com/s?i=stripbooks&rh=p_27%3AJudith+Wright+EdD&s=relevancerank&text=Judith+Wright+EdD&ref=dp_byline_sr_book_1
- Does that somehow not qualify? I do not understand.
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- @
KreftMM: By "reviews" we normally mean articles discussing books and covering them in depth, not just reviews on shopping sites.
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- Thank you for that feedback. It will help me in other regards - however, I am no longer working on Judith's Wikipedia page in any regard.
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- Keep. in WP:AUTHOR, one of the criteria for notability is that 'The person is known for originating a significant new concept, theory, or technique'. It looks to me like Wright is either the originator of the concept of
soft addiction or at the very least a leading author on the topic. Also, I can find book reviews- I am not sure where you were looking.
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Spiralwidget: I note the soft addiction thing - but I don't know if it's a "significant new" concept, as the concept seemed to be known and studied under the name "behaviour addition" from before her time (and the article redirects there now) - however with that being the only claim to notability, I didn't think it met the bar.
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(UTC) EDIT: I have to review this as instead a Comment. I could not find reviews outside of Amazon Books and she seems to receive remarkably little attention by major publications.
- Reviews are available on the books in every place they are available for purchase. I can also provide additional book reviews, as well as sources for where she has been in the media. Such as:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HlE0y5gYH1I,
https://www.grandmagazine.com/2018/03/transformational-learning-age/,
https://beta.prx.org/stories/94668,
https://blacktortoisepress.com/tag/oprah-winfrey-show/
- I'll admit that I don't know what types of sources are preferred on Wikipedia, but I can assure you I can provide the right kind if you educate me.
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- I'm not too knowledgeable either, but per
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- Keep. Wright's coining of soft addiction, per
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- Keep Meets
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- Keep I refined my search to "Judith Wright" + soft addictions, and found multiple sources through
ProQuest and
Newspapers.com and through Google that verify she did coin the term.
Sacramento Bee,
Sac Bee continued,
Orlando Sentinel,
author, Judith Wright, coined the term "soft addictions" more than 12 years ago,
Judith Wright, who labeled the phenomenon more than a decade ago,
a term she coined several years ago, so she appears to meet WP:AUTHOR#2.
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- Keep Per sources provided by Isaidnoway,
WP:AUTHOR#2 is satisfied.
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- Delete unless an editor can provide references to reliable, fully independent sources that devote significant coverage to Sewell Wright. Sources brought forward are passing mentions of her, and quotations from her, generated by the marketing campaigns for her books. Sources that call her a "life coach and lifestyles expert" are clearly parroting her self promotional activities. Yes, she coined the phrase "soft addiction" but that refers to a psychiatric condition and she has no known formal training in psychiatry or psychology or psychotherapy or counseling or anything relevant. As for Amazon reviews, they are worthless for establishing notability since Amazon is in the business of selling almost everything including non-notable books by non-notable authors, as in this case. She is definitely not a "leading author" on
Behavioral addiction. Many of the leading authors are in the reference section of that well-referenced article, and she is not among them.
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- Delete per reasons given by Cullen328, at least for now. No editor has yet provided examples of significant coverage of "soft addiction" in fully independent non-promotional venues/outlets. As far as I can tell, all the links to news clippings above are associated with Wright's books, interviews directly with Wright, promotions of her seminars, or all three.
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- Keep Although the article needs an update, it certainly meets the notability criteria.
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I've cleaned this article up a bit but after looking for additional information to add more substance, I don't think this meets
WP:GNG. He's certainly had his name attached to many published papers, but they are pretty niche in content and many co-authors don't have their own pages. Looking at the page history, it appears that this may have been initially authored by a student or someone associated with him. Most recently, an IP user copy/pasted a numbered list of his papers but started at "112" which makes me think it came from somewhere else, but I can't find where.
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- Keep per
WP:NPROF#1. On GS I see at least 12 publications in GS with 100+ citations which is generally beyond the bar required to clear #1.
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- Delete: Author of quite a few books and peer-reviewed studies, but I don't find critical review of his books, nor any indication of the academic notability needed here.
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Can't seem to find any
WP:SIGCOV on this player beyond basic coverage either from the clubs, his college, or transfer notes. It appears as though he never actually played a professional match, which might be a failure of
WP:SPORTBASIC. The only thing of basic substance I found was
this, which is local and behind a paywall.
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- Delete - no evidence of notability. If sources are found please ping me.
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- Transfermrkt has him playing in one professional match in the EFL Trophy for Portsmouth vs Peterborough (
source). Same matched that was referenced in the paywalled article.
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- Transfermarkt is not a reliable source, but one EFL Cup match still doesn't make up for the lack of
WP:SIGCOV.
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- @
GiantSnowman and
Anwegmann: Some coverage:
Shaw Network,
Daily Herald (
2),
Portsmouth News (
2). Thoughts?
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- Thanks for posting these. I saw the first three when I was initially nominating the article. The problem with these is that they are focused almost entirely on his signing a professional contract and are very much local coverage—his hometown newspaper(s). This is hardly sustained coverage or, in my view at least, significant, meaningful coverage. The fact that the event these article cover happened, but then he went on to have a very brief career with no league appearances and no coverage at all makes me feel like it doesn’t/shouldn’t suffice for
WP:SIGCOV. That said, I’m certainly open to other opinions on this. Thanks, again.
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- No issues with 'local' news per se - but to analyse the sources: Shaw Network is paywalled but what is available is a bit routine; DH 1 looks OK; DH2 is routine; Portsmouth News 1 and 2 routine. It's essentially all 'look at this American who signed for an English soccer team'.
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- Draftify: Since article isn't a
WP:STUB, and isn't completely lacking sources, I suggest turning the article into a draft, so that it can be updated, and later apply to be published again. -
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Subject does not meet the
WP:NCORP as there is a lack of independent significant coverage.
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Borderline notable magician possibly but complete dearth of any remotely
reliably sourced biographical and career info. as far as I can tell. I don't think this
link cuts it.
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This is a good example of
WP:TOOSOON and
WP:CRYSTAL. This is one proposal, but it is so early in the process that this article is not warranted.
Angryapathy (
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- Keep They are still in negotiations with the state of
Illinois on the proposal along with the new
Chicago Bears stadium. That's why they are categorized under Category:Proposed stadiums in the United States. If nothing becomes of this proposal, then the category on the page changes to Category:Unbuilt stadiums in the United States. That's the whole purpose of these categories...
Roberto221 (
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- The existence of a category doesn't mean any subject that falls under that category gets its own Wikipedia page.
WP:N is paramount, not categories.
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Biography of a politician, not
properly sourced as having any strong claim to passing
WP:NPOL. The notability claim here is that he was a county executive, which is not an "inherently" notable role that guarantees a Wikipedia article -- it's a role where he would have to pass the second clause of NPOL ("local political figures"), where the inclusion test hinges on the depth and volume of reliable source coverage about him that can be shown to support an article with. But except for one obituary upon his death, this is otherwise referenced entirely to
primary sources that are not support for notability, with no other reliable or GNG-building sources shown.
As his career was several decades ago and thus might not Google well, I'd be perfectly happy to withdraw this if somebody with much better access to archived Arlington-area media coverage from the 1970s, 1980s and 1990s than I've got can find enough to salvage it -- but nothing here is "inherently" notable enough to exempt him from having to have better referencing than this.
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Bearcat (
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- @
Bearcat: Try
https://wikipedialibrary.wmflabs.org/ >
https://wikipedialibrary.wmflabs.org/partners/27/ > his name in Maryland newspapers. The
Frederick News-Post seems to carry the most coverage, with hundreds of articles.
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- Keep -- based on his position as a county executive, I expected to give a delete opinion as that's the normal outcome for such roles. But a
staff-written obituary in the Washington Post suggests he was considered notable beyond the typical holder of such a position. The other details (Plaza named for him) wouldn't generally be enough on their own, but together with the obit pushes above the bar for GNG keep. (would not pass WP:PROF on its own). --
Michael Scott Asato Cuthbert
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- Arlington County is literally suburbs of Washington DC, so the existence of a staff-written obituary in the Washington Post just suggests the exact same purely local notability that any county executive in any county could always show, and is not in and of itself enough to singlehandedly determine that he's more notable than the norm. So we would need to see a hell of a lot more than just that alone.
Bearcat (
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- Indeed I thought of that, but the Washington Post is not a local newspaper in the same way that say that Arlington Sun-Gazzette is. It was written by their same obituary staff as their other obituaries. I think that a look at their
current obituaries will show that obituaries in the paper are dedicated to people whom they believe have more than local notability. I don't see, for instance, other local officials or former high school sports coaches there, except in the paid death notices section. --
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Ohhhhhh, no! 04:39, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
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- delete I live in the county, and I only recognized the name on a "that rings a bell" basis. He lived, he was county executive, he did county exec things, he retired, and he died. I just don't see the notability; I'm sure he was competent (or else he surely would have an article!) but the language of his term is that of press releases, which argues he did nothing that attracted greater notice.
Mangoe (
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- I would also point out that the Post and the Times are the de facto local papers of the area given the demise of almost all the county level papers, but in any case they would report such an obituary as a matter of record.
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