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Reviewer: The Rambling Man ( talk · contribs) 09:37, 30 September 2021 (UTC) reply

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• "game is based on" weird read to me. Do you mean "The game involves guiding the Incredible Hulk through a series..."?
• "offensive and defensive maneuvers" to what end? You haven't mentioned any "enemies"?
• "with the Pantheon to" who is he?
• "dimensional field" in a field?
• "offensive and defensive maneuvers" against whom?
• "An example of gameplay in The Incredible Hulk: The Pantheon Saga." no need for the full stop.
• Definitely need an explanation as to who the Pantheon are, it's not even obvious that it's an organisation without clicking on the link.
• Doesn't plot normally come before gameplay? Better to understand what's going on before how it's going on?
  • Not in video game articles. Gameplay always comes before plot. Cat's Tuxedo ( talk) 22:12, 1 October 2021 (UTC) reply
• "in a Scottish castle" no need to link Scotland.
• Who or what is "the Maestro"? I assume it's not this Maestro...?
• "developed by Attention to Detail and " might be nice to note they were a British company.
• "from the comics" should be phrased to include Marvel Comics.
• Question for me more than anything, how did the graphics designed on the SG workstations get "translated" to less powerful platforms like the PS?
  • Not a clue. I'm only going by what the sources describe, and such a matter's outside my level of expertise anyway. Cat's Tuxedo ( talk) 22:12, 1 October 2021 (UTC) reply
• Link cutscene.

That's all I can see on a first pass. The Rambling Man ( Keep wearing the mask...) 20:32, 1 October 2021 (UTC) reply

All points have been addressed. Cat's Tuxedo ( talk) 22:12, 1 October 2021 (UTC) reply