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Hello. I'll be reviewing this article. It looks pretty good and since it's weekend and I might place comments today.
Tintor2 (
talk) 15:24, 18 February 2023 (UTC)reply
Comments
Maybe a commentary from the image might add further importance to this key scene. You described this in the production section
Misato and Kaji are not introduced. Wasn't Misato Commander?
Maybe mention the fact that the three Evas are also mechas?
"Critic Dani Cavallaro noted how the staff made use of both "sophisticated CGI" for the depiction of Matarael and "traditional anime camera work" for the scenes depicting the Nerv pilots, in order "to consolidate technically the adventure's pervasive mood"" Wouldn't this be more appropiate in reception?
Introduce Sadamoto.
The second paragraph of reception is kinda big. Maybe you might wanna separate commentary from the plot from commentary from the animation?
That's all. Good work.
Tintor2 (
talk) 16:05, 18 February 2023 (UTC)reply
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Tintor2: Tried my best. Sorry for the delay, but the article's TP didn't show comments and I didn't read them until I opened the direct link two hours ago.--
TeenAngels1234 (
talk) 19:35, 23 February 2023 (UTC)reply
Passed the review. Also added to Good article's television section.
Tintor2 (
talk) 22:02, 23 February 2023 (UTC)reply