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Copyvio check - I reviewed the two non-zero matches found using Earwig's Copyvio Detector. No issues; there are some phrases like "the first Finnish native to" that appear in the article and in sources that I consider OK per
WP:LIMITED.
Image - appropriate and licenced. Alt text could be added per
MOS:ALT.
Seems quite brief; perhaps some details such as details of bouts or even just names of other opponents could be added?
"Luukkonen was a European championship medallist for six consecutive years from 2015 to 2020. Luukkonen trains in both Finland and Sweden, she represents Hilti Akademi Nord, where she is one of the head instructors" - not all supported by the cited source, which is from 2014. (Although the first sentence is supported by cited info elsewhere in the article)
All addressed (removed first phrase and re-worked the paragraph with more details as suggested)
Lewolka (
talk) 21:40, 13 October 2022 (UTC)reply
Personal life
Seems fine.
Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu competitive summary
"2nd Place IBJJF European Championship" years are in chronological order, whilst others are in reverse chronological order.
Non-essential comment: I know not everyone likes tables, but consider putting the info in tables; or, failing that, perhaps group the citations at the end as although their current placement is great for verification, it's not the friendliest presentation to a reader.
Grouped all citations together under one reference, Hopefully this works.
Lewolka (
talk) 21:40, 13 October 2022 (UTC)reply
Instructor lineage
Unless there's a consensus or manual of style issue around this being a separate section, I think it might be better as part of the prose under one of the other sections.
Removed that section since all her teachers are mentioned previously.
Lewolka (
talk) 21:40, 13 October 2022 (UTC)reply
References
Given the relatively small number of sources cited, I used a search engine, the Wikipedia Library, and NewsBank to see if there were any obvious omissions, and didn't find any. I think coverage of Luukkonen does pass the
WP:GNG threshold.
IABot could be used to archive copies of sources and prevent
WP:LINKROT.
The use of Instagram as a source seems OK for what it is supporting.
The citations in the infobox are not required as the info is cited in the article body. (not a blocker)
Thanks,
Lewolka. I'm satisfied that the article meets the GA criteria so am passing it. Thanks for your efforts. Regards,
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk) 22:27, 13 October 2022 (UTC)reply
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Did you know nomination
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The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk) 01:42, 10 November 2022 (UTC)reply
I've withdrew my nomination that caused this QPQ review, so I won't be proceeding with reviewing this.
Howard the Duck (
talk) 12:35, 31 October 2022 (UTC)reply
New reviewer needed. Thanks.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 20:18, 4 November 2022 (UTC)reply
I will review this.
jengod (
talk) 23:02, 9 November 2022 (UTC)reply
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4000+ characters, promoted to good article within the time bound, hook fact source in Finnish is accepted in good faith, hook fact is interesting (good for her!), article is appropriately sourced and NPOV, no sign of plagiarism. QPQ is done. Ready to go.
jengod (
talk) 23:19, 9 November 2022 (UTC)reply