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Reviewer: Yellow Evan ( talk · contribs) 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply

Done. STO12 ( talk) 04:57, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
  • "Harvey was also the last in a record-breaking string of eight consecutive storms that reached only tropical storm status. Hurricane Irene, the next storm to form after Harvey, reached hurricane status. Harvey developed from a westward-moving tropical wave that emerged off the coast of Africa. " delink Africa, major place. Y E Pacific Hurricane 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Done. STO12 ( talk) 05:02, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
  • "The origins of Tropical Storm Harvey trace back to a westward-moving Atlantic tropical wave that is estimated to have passed over Dakar, Senegal, at 0000 UTC on August 11, 2011.[3]" dleink Atlantic per above.
Done. STO12 ( talk) 16:24, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Done. STO12 ( talk) 16:34, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
  • "Continuing to deepen, Tropical Depression Eight attained tropical storm status during the afternoon and was named Harvey in an intermediate advisory at 1800 UTC.[18] " what is an intermediate advisory? Y E Pacific Hurricane 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
An Intermediate Advisory is an advisory that is released before an official advisory. No change needed. STO12 ( talk) 04:52, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
The layman does not know that. Y E Pacific Hurricane 04:53, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
What is a "layman"? STO12 ( talk) 04:57, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
The average reader. Y E Pacific Hurricane 05:15, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
I see, but it is good information, is there a link to information on an intermediate advisory? STO12 ( talk) 16:21, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Link it to National Hurricane Center. Y E Pacific Hurricane 16:54, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Where on that article should I link it to? STO12 ( talk) 17:07, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Intermediate advisory. Y E Pacific Hurricane 04:00, 12 November 2012 (UTC) reply
  • " Adverse conditions on the island began on August 15 and had mostly cleared by August 18, although residual shower activity remained possible throughout the day.[21]" redundant to MH, and since it was only a TL when it moved through the area, stuff like this can led to confusion. Y E Pacific Hurricane 02:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Do I need to remove it? Or replace it? Or what? STO12 ( talk) 16:34, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Remove. Y E Pacific Hurricane 04:00, 12 November 2012 (UTC) reply
  • There should be well more impact here. The writing is really good, but it is not comprehensive enough to meet GA status at this time.
What do I need to change to make it better? STO12 ( talk) 16:26, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
It was more of a general statement. Y E Pacific Hurricane 04:00, 12 November 2012 (UTC) reply
Done. STO12 ( talk) 04:57, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Should I remove it? Or replace it? Or what? STO12 ( talk) 16:37, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Expand it so it is not a bare url :P Y E Pacific Hurricane 16:54, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
To which references? STO12 ( talk) 16:39, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
All the NHC ones. User:Mitchazenia/Sandbox 7 gives the first names. Y E Pacific Hurricane
Your link is broken. D: STO12 ( talk) 17:07, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Not anymore :) Y E Pacific Hurricane 17:10, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Which refs in particular? STO12 ( talk) 16:39, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
Refs 21, 23, 24, and 25. Y E Pacific Hurricane 16:54, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
I'm sorry, but what is a TCR? STO12 ( talk) 16:39, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
TCR=Tropical Cyclone Report. Y E Pacific Hurricane
What should I add that to? STO12 ( talk) 17:07, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply
The MH. Y E Pacific Hurricane 17:10, 21 October 2012 (UTC) reply

Haven't been any updates since YE's notes on the 11th; should this be failed? Wizardman 17:31, 1 December 2012 (UTC) reply

I'm going to fail it. It's not complete yet. The MH skips from development to remnants. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk) 16:13, 4 December 2012 (UTC) reply
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