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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Anson (1886)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 11:43, 11 April 2016 (UTC) reply


I'll do this within a couple of hours. JAG UAR  11:43, 11 April 2016 (UTC) reply

Initial comments

  • I feel that the lead could be expanded slightly, to summarise the article according to WP:LEADLENGTH. A sentence or two on its career should do it
  • "Howe recommissioned for the Home Fleet in early 1901" - how is this part relevant to the lead section or HMS Anson? Did Howe's recommissioning have some consequence for this ship?
  • "The ship was paid off in three years later" - just three years later
  • "their draught increased by another 6 inches" - convert to metric
    • All measurements are converted on first use only.
  • "by armoured tubes with walls 12 inches thick" - convert to metric
  • "She returned home and paid off at Devonport" - link Ship decommissioning
    • Linked in the lede.
  • No dead links
  • No dab links

Another short one. Just minor stuff this time, but once all are addressed then this should be good to go. JAG UAR  11:53, 11 April 2016 (UTC) reply

Thanks for catching these nits.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 19:10, 11 April 2016 (UTC) reply
Thanks for addressing them. Promoted. JAG UAR  19:38, 11 April 2016 (UTC) reply