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Reviewer: Ippantekina ( talk · contribs) 04:41, 20 June 2023 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. ( reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. ( OR):

   d. ( copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. ( major aspects):

   b. ( focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. ( appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

@ Heartfox: @ MaranoFan: I am seeing that there is an active GAN opened since May. Might you please explain? Ippantekina ( talk) 04:42, 20 June 2023 (UTC) reply

There were no comments in two weeks so I closed it as per WP:GAN/I#N4a. Heartfox ( talk) 15:35, 20 June 2023 (UTC) reply

Overall a well-written article, but I do have a few suggestions re the prose:

• "Clown" is an answer song that addresses comments rapper Eminem made about her in the media and on The Eminem Show (2002) track "Superman" → "Clown" is an answer song to the comments that rapper Eminem made about Carey in the media and on the 2022 track "Superman"
  • Done
• and "The Night I Fell in Love" by the Pet Shop Boys → the Pet Shop Boys' "The Night I Feel in Love" to make it consistent
  • Done
• Also consider adding release years to the said songs
  • Added
• "Carey performed "Clown" in a circus-themed segment during the 2003–2004 Charmbracelet World Tour while two puppeteers controlled an Eminem look-alike on stage." → On the Charmbracelet World Tour, Carey performed... while...
  • Done
• "while promoting the project" → promoting the album
  • Done
• "It features background vocals by Carey and Trey Lorenz" → The song features
  • Done
• I wouldn't cite the lyrics from the booklet ( WP:NOTLYRICS) unless they were quoted and discussed by the scholarly sources/reviews
  • I cut down on the lyrics
• "a worthy exception to the album's formula" any more context as to what "formula" means here?
  • Added a note and changed "formula" to "theme"
• Not sure if "juxtaposed with" is the right wording... I'd just use "compared to"
  • Done
• Rest of prose looks good! Kudos to the scholarly sources that you found :) Ippantekina ( talk) 08:57, 22 June 2023 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the very helpful comments, Ippantekina. Heartfox ( talk) 18:09, 24 June 2023 (UTC) reply

Nice work, Heartfox. I did a quick spotcheck and no issues turned out. Sourcing is appropriately formatted. The article looks ready for a GA :) Passing-- Ippantekina ( talk) 07:12, 26 June 2023 (UTC) reply