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The result was: promoted by
Edge3 (
talk) 19:36, 4 July 2023 (UTC)reply
New reviewer needed; it's been over a month and a half since the initial post and a full seven days since the subsequent ping. Striking the original "placeholder". Thank you to whoever takes this on.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 18:58, 2 July 2023 (UTC)reply
New enough, long enough. Hook short enough and sourced (as is every paragraph). No neutrality problems found, no copyright problems found, no maintenance templates found. Appears to be your second DYK; you get three further credits. Good to go.--Launchballer 11:21, 3 July 2023 (UTC)reply
There were no comments in two weeks so I closed it as per
WP:GAN/I#N4a.
Heartfox (
talk) 15:35, 20 June 2023 (UTC)reply
Overall a well-written article, but I do have a few suggestions re the prose:
"Clown" is an answer song that addresses comments rapper Eminem made about her in the media and on The Eminem Show (2002) track "Superman" → "Clown" is an answer song to the comments that rapper Eminem made about Carey in the media and on the 2022 track "Superman"
Done
and "The Night I Fell in Love" by the Pet Shop Boys → the Pet Shop Boys' "The Night I Feel in Love" to make it consistent
Done
Also consider adding release years to the said songs
Added
"Carey performed "Clown" in a circus-themed segment during the 2003–2004 Charmbracelet World Tour while two puppeteers controlled an Eminem look-alike on stage." → On the Charmbracelet World Tour, Carey performed... while...
Done
"while promoting the project" → promoting the album
Done
"It features background vocals by Carey and Trey Lorenz" → The song features
Done
I wouldn't cite the lyrics from the booklet (
WP:NOTLYRICS) unless they were quoted and discussed by the scholarly sources/reviews
I cut down on the lyrics
"a worthy exception to the album's formula" any more context as to what "formula" means here?
Added a note and changed "formula" to "theme"
Not sure if "juxtaposed with" is the right wording... I'd just use "compared to"
Done
Rest of prose looks good! Kudos to the scholarly sources that you found :)
Ippantekina (
talk) 08:57, 22 June 2023 (UTC)reply
Nice work,
Heartfox. I did a quick spotcheck and no issues turned out. Sourcing is appropriately formatted. The article looks ready for a GA :) Passing--
Ippantekina (
talk) 07:12, 26 June 2023 (UTC)reply