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Prose is poor with needless information (apple-red hair)
lack of clarity ("At the age of 12, he is often looked down upon and mistrusted by others in the palace, despite the fact that he is actually a genius." You mean he being discriminated for his youth, not a discriminated event in the past)
low accessibility (You're introducing Raji without context. If he is too insignificant for a mention, only introduce him in the plot summary).
Inconsistent date styles.
You can remove the Chinese dates and mention them shortly in prose form. The most significant dates and ISBN that should be listed are "Origin country" and English.
You can expand content by investigating magazine issues. Official websites may have an archive or you have to surf with wayback machine. Use Comic Holmes for a quick reference.
Comic Holmes