20:3320:33, 27 April 2024diffhist−51
Corruption in Morocco
(1) "This is wrong" needs to be clarified -- what exactly is signified by "This"? (2) Please, clarify "Corruption is very high in morocco" in the context of the Corruption Perceptions Index surrounding the sentence. Morocco's score of only 38 (out of 100) signals high corruption, but not very high -- the worst score is only 11. Also, the worldwide average score of 43 indicates that Morocco's high corruption is only a little worse than average in the world.currentTag: Undo
20:0820:08, 27 April 2024diffhist−18
Kolchak Coup
Remove wikilink incorrectly linking
"supreme power" (of the non-fictional All-Russian Council of Ministers) to the fictional Marvel comic book series about the Squadron Supreme.
17:1317:13, 25 April 2024diffhist+3
Yahya Khan
"succeeded the presidency" would mean that the office of the presidency came to an end and was replaced by Yahya. What actually happened is that Yahya became president, replacing Ayub.
17:0517:05, 25 April 2024diffhist−1
Yahya Khan
→Presidency (1969–1971): Emphasize that, per the source, the uprising spread to East Pakistan from West Pakistan: ft "A sustained anti-regime mass movement began in the fall of 1968 in West Pakistan. The uprising spread [in] East Pakistan and gathered strength." -> "A sustained anti-regime mass movement began in the fall of 1968 in West Pakistan. The uprising spread [to] East Pakistan and gathered strength."
16:3616:36, 25 April 2024diffhist−4
Yahya Khan
Using the passive voice here opens the unanswered question of *who* advanced Yahya. Better to use active voice; regardless of how he advanced, he did advance.
04:0904:09, 24 April 2024diffhist0
USCGC Reliance (WMEC-615)
Clarify that this ship is the first of the 210' Medium Endurance Cutter class overall, not just the first of that class to be named "Reliance".current
05:4105:41, 22 April 2024diffhist−1
Corruption in Brazil
Change "refn" style note to "efn" style note so that the list of countries to which Brazil is being compared displays properly.current
16:0316:03, 20 April 2024diffhist−4
The Ministry of Ungentlemanly Warfare
→Plot: "Scuttling" a ship is done by people on board the ship, not by people outside the ship, e.g. by U-boats with torpedoes and gunfire: ft "aid ships constantly scuttled by German U-Boats" -> "aid ships constantly sunk by German U-Boats"
05:4005:40, 19 April 2024diffhist+788
Corruption in Kosovo
Updated Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023. Added some regional context so that rank and score are more understandable. Added "Notes"section so that list of regional countries to which Kosovo is compared displays correctly.current