15:2015:20, 24 February 2014diffhist+1
Galen
minor modification: although, in general, "who" is used for people, it is not the case in ALL situations; "that" is used for distinction between groups; so, here, "those that were going to survive" is distinguished from "those that were not going to,,,"
14:5814:58, 24 February 2014diffhist−4
Boeing 727
syntactical and grammatical correction: "both" not "which" is the subject of this SENTENCE, so "both are closer in size" should be preceded with a semi-colon, as was attempted before; otherwise, verb changed to gerund to keep dependent-clause status
23 February 2014
17:4517:45, 23 February 2014diffhist−1
Manufacture of cheddar cheese
minor corrections for clarification: misplaced modifiers, misuse of "generally": "it is generally present" means "it is present on a wide [general] scale," whereas "in general, it is present" means "when it IS present, the general situation is..."
03:1703:17, 23 February 2014diffhist−5
Wasabi
reverted to the learned copy-editor's edits [learn language history and etymology before attempting to edit]