I have updated this article with suggestions from contributors and adminstrators suggestions. I am requesting a second peer reivew before requesting featured article review. thanks to everyone for prior help and for any additonal help from everyone.
Ccson 04:44, 18 April 2006 (UTC)reply
Comment (fixed second nomination)
Wikipedia:Featured article review is not what you are looking for, it is
WP:FAC. (
WP:FAR refers to a review of already-featured articles to help them maintain their FA status :). Just thought I'd clarify. AndyZt 21:27, 18 April 2006 (UTC)reply
First off, several minor issues. The lead at most should be 4 paragraphs, per
WP:LEAD. All years with full dates should be linked, as shown in
WP:CONTEXT. Only the first letter of a heading should be capitalized (besides
proper nouns), so words like "Expansion" should not be capitalized. AndyZt 22:09, 19 April 2006 (UTC)reply