Oppose. Lack of references.
Poppypetty 21:26, 19 May 2006 (UTC)reply
Comment The link to the citation in the lead needs to be replaced with a proper citation. --
Osbus 21:32, 19 May 2006 (UTC)reply
Object
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
Please provide
WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also
WP:CITE/ES; templates like {{
Cite web}} and {{
Cite book}} may be useful here.
This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>.
The article has a few or too many inline external links, which hamper the readibility of the article. Please convert them to
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA.
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE,
years without full dates generally should not be linked. For example, January2006 should not be linked, instead change it to January 2006. Also, please note
WP:BTW and
WP:CONTEXT, which state that years with full dates should be linked. For example, February 28, 2006, should be come February 28,
2006.
Dates should use either 0 or 2 commas, depending upon the subject of the article; American-related articles should use 2 commas, while British-related articles generally used 0 commas. For example, for two commas: In
January 15,
2006, this and that happened, while for zero commas, use: In
January 152006 this and that happened.
Additionally, after a year, for consistency, a comma should either be used throughout the entire article or not used at all.