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Automotive industry. Returning to WP from a sabbatical, I have started some spring cleaning on this important page. It and I need all the help we can get.
BsBsBs, 02:08, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
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BsBsBs: You need to tell us exactly what needs cleaning up in the article. I've just been on it and I haven't found any errors.
Plum3600 (
talk) 16:27, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
Does not appear to need cleanup. North America1000 17:40, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
December 2016
Heather Hardy - Repeated sources throughout article. Some sources being included 50 times throughout a single page. 17 sources cited, but repeated 300 times..
Article no longer has this issue. North America1000 03:05, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
Ahmed bin Saeed Al Maktoum Could you please cleanup the layout of the article, particularly from sections Career to Patrilineal descent.Emir of Wikipedia (
talk) 14:05, 6 October 2016 (UTC)
Does not appear to have cleanup issues at this time. North America1000 03:11, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
Grace VanderWaal – Article needs more filling and better layout than the bare minimum. Very fresh article.Mr. Magoo (
talk) 14:43, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
DoneMr. Magoo (
talk) 10:58, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
Fixed the problematic references and did a bit of copyediting.
Leschnei (
talk) 17:40, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
Simone Lange – May I request that someone double-check this, since I am a German native speaker and my English might not be perfect. Thanks! --
TobbiM (
talk) 22:09, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
I did a bit of editing for the wording and added tags. Anarchyte (
work |
talk) 07:46, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
Fair City - This article needs a major ref cleanup. Other than that, it seems fine to me.
Tails3333 (
talk) 18:01, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
Update - I cleaned up the article a bit.
Tails3333 (
talk) 18:59, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
Fixed - I fixed one bare url the other references look fine.
Leschnei (
talk) 01:22, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
All articles within category Category:Unincorporated communities in New Jersey. Consistency is needed in all entries, including subcategory/parent category fixings, some have two maps, some have one, flag icons in infoboxes, etc. Discussion has taken place about category and map issue. Pages should include only one map. It was still left up in the air if parent category should remain.
Tinton5 (
talk) 00:20, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
Has been fixed.
Tinton5 (
talk) 01:31, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
Actually, the article still has several bare urls. North America1000 02:25, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
Oops, not sure how I messed this up, but I think it's fixed now.
Leschnei (
talk) 18:05, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
November 2015
Registered nurse – Clean up needed as well as globalization matters. Also, clean up needed in references section.
Tinton5 (
talk) 04:58, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
Cleaned up a bit.
Tinton5 (
talk) 00:15, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
Bare urls fixed by other users.
Ayub407talk 18:48, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
Acephala group – An article about cultivars of Brassica oleracea, it is tagged for reorganization, bare urls (many of which are embedded in the citations) and lacking a lead section. North America1000 09:48, 18 September 2015 (UTC)
Lead line appears to be added before I started to cleanup. I've fixed the bare urls issue.
Ayub407talk 18:44, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
Fixed I have performed additional edits. This has essentially been fixed now. North America1000 02:58, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
June 2015
Suzlon Energy – Significant formatting errors in the references section. Inline citations need formatting.North America1000 11:00, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
Note: This one above, along with many others, also need some rewording, especially in lead paragraph.
Tinton5 (
talk) 20:11, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
Fixed I reworked the references and copyedited the text, including the lead. There are 4 dead links that I couldn't fix.
Leschnei (
talk) 16:31, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
FloorballFixed, checked & fixed all of the references and added 'convert' templates for the metric measurements.
Leschnei (
talk) 14:45, 7 September 2016 (UTC)
Attempted to lessen the one-sided, grandiloquent writing by (hopefully) removing personal observation, interpretation, and synthesis. Not perfect by any stretch. More help is welcomed! :D
Cyphoidbomb (
talk) 05:55, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
I think that you cleaned it up quite well. I did a little more copyediting and fixed some bare urls. I would call this Fixed.
Leschnei (
talk) 18:53, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
John Enos III - Page is a mess. The entire lead is one big clump of info, which needs to be trimmed and layout better.Tinton5 (
talk) 21:35, 19 April 2013 (UTC)
Withdraw dated nomination. North America1000 18:54, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Heriots Cricket Club – Needs better organization and the addition of sections, disambiguation in some of its links, and currently has no inline citations.Northamerica1000(talk) 09:14, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
Withdraw dated nomination. North America1000 18:53, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Stated concerns no longer exist in the article. North America1000 20:35, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Modena Park 2017 - The article is eligible for DYK, but need cleanup because of "broken English". Can you help me please? --
Holapaco77 (
talk) 06:00, 26 July 2017 (UTC)
Partly done: Partially done. Citation errors are fixed. Most remaining bare urls are also dead links which will require retrival at the webarchive.
Phatom87(
talk •
contribs) 19:09, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
Withdraw dated nomination. North America1000 20:23, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
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Northamerica1000: I've just checked the article and the only think that is missing is the title when you cite the references. What errors did you see?
Plum3600 (
talk) 14:10, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
Hi
Plum3600: The titles missing create a bunch of red-colored notices stating "Missing or empty |title=", and there are many bare urls in the references section, although they are within citation templates. North America1000 18:05, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
Partly done – Title errors fixed. Still has bare URLs though. Someone needs to utilize web archive to find the webpages in reference otherwise the links just lead to 404 errors which are not really proof. Mordecairule 18:25, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
Withdraw dated nomination. North America1000 20:33, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Does not require cleanup at this time. North America1000 20:29, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Malcolm L. Lazin – Many bare urls and overextended images in article would benefit from being moved into a gallery. North America1000 06:11, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
Derek R Bullamore fixed the urls and I nested the film posters better. Personally, I would have cut them altogether, but there are no articles to use them in. Wyliepedia 23:09, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
I performed some image layout. Issues are essentially resolved at this time. North America1000 20:53, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Manuel José Ossandón – Every source is a bare url, and uses unreliable sources (Wikipedia articles) to verify content. Also has no links to other articles as of this post.North America1000 04:11, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
Stated concerns no longer exist in the article. North America1000 20:50, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Withdraw. Per
WP:BURL, "Note that some citation styles, such as the MLA style, use full bibliographic citation that happen to display the text of the URL in addition to proper identifying information, like the author, date, and title of the publication. These are not considered bare URLs." North America1000 20:42, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
The problems noted above are not present on the page at this time. North America1000 20:01, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Bicycle cooperative – Would benefit from copy editing and addressing additional tags atop the article.North America1000 02:47, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
Ray Of Light - Needs some basic language cleaning up, correct grammar, etc.— Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Apex156 (
talk •
contribs) 18:53, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
Article is presently a
WP:GA, so this has very likely been addressed. North America1000 19:59, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Prayag Jha – Needs copy editing to address promotional tone, improve cohesion, and to address peacock words/language.North America1000 04:07, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
Withdraw dated nomination. North America1000 19:58, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Senior societies at University of Pennsylvania – Has cleanup template stating "The specific problem is: article is formatted in many small sections of short sentences; formatting in lists is wrong." It is also tagged as needing copy editing.North America1000 04:46, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
Withdraw dated nomination. North America1000 19:57, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Investigative Project on Terrorism - article was listed earlier, but a BLPN sidelined it. Result was removal of the template. I incorrectly listed IPT at GOCE and withdrew it.
User:Baffle gab1978's summary ..."this article has a litany of woes, mainly dodgy sourcing and BLP issues."— Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Atsme (
talk •
contribs) 09:29, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
Was redirected to
Steven Emerson on 22 November 2015, and that article has received many copy edits since this time. North America1000 18:27, 23 September 2017 (UTC)