The second sentence in this section needs to be broken into two or three.
I did break it in two. First some geometrical information, then the geologic one.
Jo-Jo Eumerus (
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Regional setting
the current angle of 30° by 3 mya
We would normally spell out numbers lowers than 10, but if your want it like this for consistency I think that's okay too.
Some earthquake activity and seismic swarms were triggered by the 2010 Chile earthquake which may be indicative of unstable hydromagmatic systems or interactions of the magmatic system with far field earthquake waves.[17]
The clause following which is non-restrictive, so it should be set off with commas.
This is a very nice piece overall. The writing is slightly jargon, but that would probably be hard to avoid. On that point, I suggest you make sure your paraphrasing is good, as it's easy to get too close to the source when including so much straightforward technical prose. Good job; keep up the great work!
RO(talk) 21:44, 29 October 2015 (UTC)reply