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I have created this list with the intention of a
WP:FLC nomination, and was hoping to see what needs to be done before I do so. Thanks,
Mattythewhite (
talk) 13:32, 6 June 2008 (UTC)reply
"playing in minor football" - needs explanation for non experts.
Doing...I'll need to look into this further.
Mattythewhite (
talk) 12:26, 10 June 2008 (UTC)reply
DoneI've removed "minor football" - I'm not sure where I found the phrase in the first place... quite bemused.
Mattythewhite (
talk) 12:30, 10 June 2008 (UTC)reply
Image caption is a sentence fragment so remove the full stop.
"during the early 1880s the club participated in the Scarborough & East Riding County Cup." - so no league? Maybe re-affirm the fact that no league games were played by the club.
DoneMentioned how it was a "stonger" league.
Mattythewhite (
talk) 15:48, 14 June 2008 (UTC)reply
"...competed in the Midland League for over 30 years, which included a seven-year absence ..." - so they didn't "compete" for over 30 years if for seven years there was no competition, right?
Why are some top scorers red and some not linked? Probably good reasons but I'm confused.
Doing...The ones with red links are notable by passing
WP:BIO and I'm in the process of creating their articles (should have mentioned this really...), and the unlinked top scorers are not notable.
Mattythewhite (
talk) 12:26, 10 June 2008 (UTC)reply
DoneAll top scorer articles now created.
Mattythewhite (
talk) 17:33, 11 June 2008 (UTC)reply
Notes and References sometimes now merged under a general "References" section with "General" and "Specific" as subheadings.
This looks ready for FLC. Decent lead, and a comprehensive list. I started a list of prose issues, but decided it would be easier to fix them myself.
Oldelpaso (
talk) 14:04, 11 June 2008 (UTC)reply