Hello @
RealFakeKim:, I've fixed up some of the issues you mentioned. Can you please point out to me the grammatical errors in the lead? Also, could you please give me ideas as to how to rewrite the second and third paragraphs? Thanks a lot for reviewing my article.
WDM10 (
talk) 05:54, 23 March 2020 (UTC)reply
WDM10, sorry I missread the lead thats all fine. For the other paragraphs I would say something like:
Out of the 62 hat-tricks scored six people have achived it twice. These being Ian Schubert, Billy Slater, Akuila Uate, Manu Vatuvei, Jarryd Hayne, Suliasi Vunivalu and Valentine Holmes. 10 people have scored an aditinal trie on top of the hat-trick. Valentine Holmes is the only player to score 5 and 6 tries respectfuly in a single game. Four players have scored hat-tricks while being on the losing side. These being Bob Fulton, Ian Schubert, Damien Blanch and Chris Taripo. Billy Smith is the only player to score a hat-trick of feald goals.