Georgi Kinkladze
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This article recently
failed a featured nomination, so I am looking for feedback on what else is needed to reach featured standard.
Oldelpaso (
talk) 13:45, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
- I'd move ref 3 to after Gio, since I presume it refers to just Gio, not Gio and Kinky.
- I'm pretty sure there's something somewhere in the MoS which specifies placing refs after punctuation.
- I'd add some wikilinks to "When Georgian football formed leagues independent of Soviet competition in 1989". There a few alternatives at
Association football around the world#Europe (UEFA).
- Our articles about Georgian football are sketchy at best, but I've put in a link to Football in Georgia.
- I know you've linked midfielder and playmaker quite high, but I'd be tempted to repeat those wikilinks in the "Style of play" section.
- Done.
- Maybe add new columns for the references in the statistics section.
Everything else from myself has previously been addressed. Peanut4 ( talk) 14:09, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
To start, I offer you an apology for my bad timing. I went to take another look for problems just after the FAC was archived. Picking up from where I left off...
- Anorthosis: "on the day of second leg of the tie against Rangers" Incorrect grammar.
- Rubin Kazan: Don't need the club name linked here, since it is in the previous section.
- "his corner kick was headed into the net by a team-mate" Which team-mate?
- Don't like "in three more minutes".
- "mistake in is choice of penalty taker" Typo.
- Berdyev doesn't need a link here.
- Current ref 106 not after punctuation.
- 2006 season: Rostov doesn't need another link. Giants2008 ( talk) 02:31, 26 May 2008 (UTC)