This is one of the first articles I've made from scratch. I tried to organize it as best as possible. I would specifically like feedback as to the organization of the page. i.e. Do you like how the sections are split up? Should the Obscenity Prosecution have gotten its own section? is it reasonable to have "History," "Meanstream Publicity," etc. under "History" or should they have their own sections, or should they not even have their own sections and just be explained somewhere in the article. Is the way I laied out the "former/current" employees section the best way it could be laid out? Would it be better in chart form? Any feedback would be appreciated in regards to this article. Thanks.
JB196 00:23, 12 June 2006 (UTC)reply
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