I would welcome comments on all aspects of this article including it's style, readability and layout. Where is more work needed? Thanks
Andeggs 21:35, 18 June 2006 (UTC)reply
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Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
Per
WP:MOS, the first letters of words in heading should not be capitalized unless: 1) it is a
proper noun or 2) it is the first word of the heading.
Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) maybe too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
is considered
might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, please strike this comment).
This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>.
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