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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get this article up to GA status but can you give me suggestions on how to upgrade it?
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I love rpgs (
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- A couple suggestions:
- You can move the lists in the
Timeline section into a table or something, because the list breaks up the prose.
- Good job on the loss of life & structural damage tables!
- Oh, and, on the photo of the Bay Bridge in
this section, you can add the smog explanation to the caption.
- I hope these suggestions will give you some ideas!
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