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Muntz Street

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Arthur Sifton

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Judiciary Reorganization Bill of 1937

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Improv Toronto

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Rufus Wainwright discography

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William McGregor

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Enchanted (film)

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Carnoustie

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Luster (film)

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Halo: Uprising

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Battle of Princeton

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Kinzua Bridge

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Ratite

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Idlewild and Soak Zone

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List of American television episodes with LGBT themes, 1990-1997

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Battle of Pell's Point

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Sozin's Comet: The Final Battle

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Oxford United F.C.

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Kala (album)

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Gomer Pyle, U.S.M.C.

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So Amazin'

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United States cable news

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• Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==. ^[?]
• There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
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• The script has spotted the following contractions: isn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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Battle of Harlem Heights

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List of Popotan characters

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• Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style. ^[?]
• There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
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  • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment). ^[?]
• Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
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Economy of Iran

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Malcolm X

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DCEETA

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Monarchies in the Americas

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Melbourne International Comedy Festival

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System of a Down discography

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Banker horse

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List of pre-Stonewall American television episodes with LGBT themes

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Cycling at the 2008 Summer Olympics - Women's road race

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Hot 100 number-one hits of 2004 (United States)

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Plunketts Creek Bridge No. 3

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Benjamin Franklin High School (New Orleans, Louisiana)

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Kylfings

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Ninja Gaiden (NES)

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Jupiter Trojan

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List of awards and nominations received by Amy Winehouse

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List of valkyrie names in Norse mythology

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Jack Kemp

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Drizzt Do'Urden

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Nashville Sounds all-time roster

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List of deadliest tornadoes

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Glacier Peak

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Icos

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Alexander Cameron Rutherford

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BBC Sports Personality of the Year Unsung Hero Award

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Wind power in Romania

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List of awards and nominations received by Fiona Apple

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Union busting

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The Last Castle

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Sam & Max: Freelance Police

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Sultan Iskandar of Johor

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Carsten Borchgrevink

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Characters of Smallville

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Number-one albums of 1985 (U.S.)

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James T. Kirk

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Honolulu High-Capacity Transit Corridor Project

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Germany national football manager

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Germany national football manager

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List of Bleach episodes (season 10)

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List of Spice and Wolf episodes

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Brunswick (Brittonkill) Central School District

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Wildfire

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Continuum (album)

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Baba Amte

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Water fluoridation

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Bette Davis filmography

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History of Sunderland A.F.C.

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Yellow (song)

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Chronology of the Doctor Who universe

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Number-one albums of 1984 (U.S.)

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Horse

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Igbo people

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PUTCO

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Number-one albums of 1983 (U.S.)

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Survivors (2008 TV series)

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Pope John Paul II

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Pokémon Diamond and Pearl

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These Are the Voyages...

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Number-one albums of 1999 (U.S.)

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Mozart in Italy

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Carabane

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Gumpert

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Outliers (book)

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History of the Han Dynasty

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Marketing performance measurement and management

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List of San Francisco Municipal Railway lines

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Almu

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List of Nashville Sounds no-hitters

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Liv Tyler

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The Pilot (Friends)

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Zaprešić

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Vasil Levski

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Epsilon Eridani

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Deinosuchus

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Steve Burdick

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Hot 100 number-one hits of 2003 (United States)

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Indonesian killings of 1965–66

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List of Orlando Magic head coaches

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Jana Linke Sippl

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Rudolf Wolters

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Housecleaning

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Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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Super Bowl Most Valuable Player Award

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Munich air disaster

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Richard Neville, 16th Earl of Warwick

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Hot 100 number-one hits of 2008 (United States)

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List of Football League Cup winners

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History of slavery in Indiana

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Gary Gygax

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Alberta and Great Waterways Railway scandal

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Jennifer Brunner

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  • Started 3rd para.-- TonyTheTiger ( t/ c/ bio/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:LOTM) 05:13, 25 January 2009 (UTC) reply
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List of FA Amateur Cup winners

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Black Death in England

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Hillsboro, Oregon

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Suffolk Punch

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List of Copa Libertadores winners

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New Bedford Historic District

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South African Scout Association

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Avatar: The Last Airbender

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Timeline of the 1992 Atlantic hurricane season

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Blue discharge

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Gillender Building

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Kayastha

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Plutonium

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Post Oak Mall

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Ipecac Recordings discography

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B-52 Stratofortress

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Greece Runestones

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Long-toed Salamander

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Bride of Frankenstein

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Judiciary Reorganization Bill of 1937

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United States Military Academy

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  I have expanded the lead section and attempted to summarize it more adequately. Does it up to WP:LEAD now, or is it any closer to meeting the standard? Ahodges7 ( talk) 01:56, 4 January 2009 (UTC) reply

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  I've reduced the captions so they are as concise as possible. Ahodges7 ( talk) 03:08, 4 January 2009 (UTC) reply

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  I think I've corrected this problem now. Ahodges7 ( talk) 00:19, 7 January 2009 (UTC) reply

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  Corrected. Ahodges7 ( talk) 03:10, 4 January 2009 (UTC) reply

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Ravenloft (D&D module)

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Edinburgh Castle

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Andrea Guarneri

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Ringo Starr

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William McGregor

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History of Mumbai

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Sideshow Bob

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Yip Pin Xiu

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Bohemian Rhapsody

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Hershey Creamery Company

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