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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to add it to
Wikipedia:Featured topic candidates/Seasons of 30 Rock, but as this season of 30 Rock is stil on the air, the article is ineligible for
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Hello, there. Well, there is not many concerns about this list. I only have some minor tidbits to report :
I realize the series is still on air, but do we already know when the last episode is scheduled ? If yes, mention it in the lead.
What does TGS actually mean ? Write it in full form the first time you mention it, after that TGS will do.
I've never seen the series, but was there any change in the cast or production personal since last season that we need to know of ?
What is Kenneth Parcell's job in the team ? Please add it in the text.
Has Jonathan a surname ? If yes, mention it.
Cast section : the prose needs to be revised, you use always the same sentence. Try to vary a bit if you don't want the casual reader to be bored before the end of the paragraph. I have modified a sentence already.
What are the sources of the episode list ? Where do titles, directors, writers, etc. come from ?
And lastly, in, say, two years or so, you might want to add a DVD release section ;D If there are plans to do so already, mention it.