The article was kept 14:13, 10 April 2008.
Brilliant prose promotion, previous FARC, does not meet current citation requirements. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 01:22, 13 March 2008 (UTC) reply
This has come a long way. I don't like the comparison to modern sports in the first paragraph. It's tangential. Could that be removed and maybe a couple of other sentences add to fill out the lead? I don't think this will need FARC. Marskell ( talk) 10:44, 6 April 2008 (UTC) reply