The article was not promoted by Dabomb87 03:13, 15 June 2009 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured article because... I feel it passes the criteria mostly and believe it should at least be given a try at becoming an FA. It just passed its GA review a day or two ago so it has been edited heavily with a few disagreements which have been resolved. Just thought to make that clear. All comments will be taken care of quickly. Will C 08:11, 12 June 2009 (UTC) reply
Needs a bit of work on the writing.
Comments – I was hoping to make it through the article in one reading, since it is a short one. However, I'm running into problems all over the place in the body. Tony only scratched the surface with this one.
If a short article is going to be brought to FAC, the prose has to be solid since shorter pages should naturally have fewer rough patches. Unfortunately, there are a large number of them here. Please get some outside help on this one. Giants2008 ( 17-14) 03:01, 14 June 2009 (UTC) reply
Note The article has been protected for three days. Dabomb87 ( talk) 00:20, 15 June 2009 (UTC) reply