The article was promoted by GrahamColm 17:19, 11 September 2012 [1].
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This is intended to be the main article for a future FT. I've had to select from masses of data, so if I've missed your favourite water beetle, bryophyte or pillbox, let me know. I've had complete reviews for prose at Milhist from Hchc2009 and AustralianRupert, and Dank edited the history section. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 17:10, 3 September 2012 (UTC) reply
Comments. As always, feel free to revert my copyediting. Please check the edit summaries. - Dank ( push to talk)
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Comment - very interesting topic and looks close to FA, but i will try a more thorough check later. At first glance the lead could use some improvements:
In summary the last lead para appears to take the SSSI's side and sounds not completely un-involved (even on worthwhile projects the encyclopedic article has to keep it's distance). Also replace analyzing statements with factual information, the analysis is better kept to the main text. More later. GermanJoe ( talk) 11:26, 5 September 2012 (UTC) reply
Support - that was some really quick fixing. Aside from the solved lead issues very little to nitpick: