The article was not promoted by Karanacs 13:48, 27 September 2011 [1].
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After a few months away from editing, I decided to return in a big way. The fifth FAC of my current project to bring the inaugural class (1945) of players in the Hockey Hall of Fame (which I might add, has been adopted by a user on the French Wiki), Hobey Baker was the lone American player. While a student at Princeton University he excelled at both hockey and football, and had a profound influence on F. Scott Fitzgerald. He then served in the First World War and died weeks after it ended. The only person in both the HHOF and College Football Hall of Fame, this article is unlike any others I've worked on, in that his life was so diverse and not soley focused on hockey. I look forward to the reviews. Kaiser matias ( talk) 02:23, 8 September 2011 (UTC) reply
Source review - spotchecks not done. Nikkimaria ( talk) 03:19, 8 September 2011 (UTC) reply
While this was not the focus of my review, I will also note that the article would benefit from some copy-editing. Nikkimaria ( talk) 03:19, 8 September 2011 (UTC) reply
Question: "On May 21 Baker helped to bring down an enemy plane for the first time": first time for him? first time for any American in the war? - Dank (
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Copyscape checks - No issues were revealed by Copyscape searches. Graham Colm ( talk) 09:11, 11 September 2011 (UTC) reply
Oppose, at least for now. This article needs some serious attention to the prose. A few examples:
... basically someone needs to take a good look through this entire article for similar issues. Malleus Fatuorum 23:23, 11 September 2011 (UTC) reply