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Hi there , I'm pretty new here and would appreciate your thoughts. You recently reverted my addition of an external link to the "education" section of the Edenderry page. Would an external link refering to the " history" subpage be suitable as it provides information relating to historical education at large in Edenderry? Thanks in advance 😃. Xcalliber21 ( talk) 13:35, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
- @ Xcalliber21: That should be great! Looking at the article, you'd have to create an "External links" heading underneath the see also section and put your link there. Thanks for improving the wiki :) -REDACTED403 (talk) 13:44, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
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Hi,
I recently noticed you changed my edit beacuse "promoting yourself". I AM NOT. Do you think this: Raven Brooks Online (RBO) is an upcoming game from the Hello Neighbor franchise that offers players the opportunity to step into the shoes of either the Protector or an Intruder. As an Intruder, players must strategically steal loot from the Protector's home and other Intruders while navigating through a highly emergent multiplayer sandbox environment. Developed by the creator of Hello Neighbor, RBO promises to provide an immersive and thrilling experience for players looking for a unique and challenging gameplay experience. Raven Brooks Online entered public playtesting on February 16, 2023, but was closed just 3 days later. - Is promoting my self?! This game is not on the wikipedia page of Hello Neighbor so I was just trying to put it!
Take back my edit,
Please Caiodevvv ( talk) 13:06, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Your edit reads as promotional pr speak that the developers would put on their website to attract investors. Definitely not appropriate on a Wikipedia article -REDACTED403 (talk) 13:13, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'm free to converse on how we can link the references to the page Geometry Dash/#Community. Most of the references are either community made or on a Fandom page. Please tell me ways of referencing for the page. Gloucesternairobi ( talk) 12:18, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, thanks for reaching out. As a Geometry Dash fan myself, my issues with your addition mainly come down to the fact that Wikipedia doesn't have to include everything regarding a subject. All of the text about memes (lobotomy levels / fire in the hole) is irrelevant, especially since it will be dated very quickly in a few more months or years (as most memes are).
- Other videogame pages don't have entries on memes, or specifically talking about mod loaders (like the Minecraft page). Minecraft objectively has a bigger modding scene than geometry dash, so it makes sense to give a nod to it - but it is not needed at all on the gd page.
- BUT, I've found a decent source for your Top 1 heading here:
https://www.pockettactics.com/geometry-dash/demonlist. I think that everything except the Top 1 content needs to be removed. Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia! :D
-REDACTED403
(talk) 12:40, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- @
Gloucesternairobi: pinging you because I forgot in the original message
-REDACTED403
(talk) 12:41, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- I will try rework on the community page to make it more Wikipedia-standard. Thanks!
Gloucesternairobi (
talk) 15:51, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- Also, i read some guidelines about video games, does this mean i can create a page for Geode? " Geode (Geometry Dash)" Gloucesternairobi ( talk) 15:58, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- I will try rework on the community page to make it more Wikipedia-standard. Thanks!
Gloucesternairobi (
talk) 15:51, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- @
Gloucesternairobi: pinging you because I forgot in the original message
-REDACTED403
(talk) 12:41, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
Hi,
I was using Twinkle to revert some edits, then it said "REDACTED 403 was the last user to edit". I thought Twinkle was not working as it should, and then realized it was an actual user (you!). Nice username!
Sincerely,
Myrealnamm (
💬talk ·
✏️contribs) at 23:26, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- Cheers mate :D -REDACTED403 (talk) 23:28, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello, thank you for your feedback. I'll change the style to more neutral and try uploading again. Thanks! Dominivo ( talk) 04:54, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello,
I have just submitted some updates on a biography page and you've reverted all my changes even if they are correct and actually useful as they bring many references to the updated content. This content is not promotional as you can see from the text and the references, it only updates a very old biography.
Why have you reverted the changes?
Thank you. Dcgavril ( talk) 13:27, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- @
Dcgavril. While you do add some references, the bulk of my issue with your edit comes from the very promotional and non-neutral tone. Calling someone an "innovator", "pioneer", talking about their "passions", their "holistic" approach sounds like the person is being introduced at some conference, or their LinkedIn bio. Check out some of the links I left on your talk page for how to write in a more neutral tone, or read a
featured biography
-REDACTED403
(talk) 13:42, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- I understand what you are saying, I will remove the "innovator" mention and send a new edit, but you've even reverted even the simple photo update, it seems more of an issue with me and not the updates themselves, so even if you are pointing out some ways to write a biography it is not fair what you've done as I'm also losing time improving the content on Wikipedia.
Dcgavril (
talk) 13:48, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry bout the photo revert, that was a byproduct of how my software works. That should be fine to add back in as long as the photo is in public domain. I definitely don't have an issue with you specifically, check my contribution history to see the amount of edits I work with. Have a nice night :)
-REDACTED403
(talk) 13:56, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- courtesy ping @
Dcgavril
-REDACTED403
(talk) 13:57, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have just published a updated version, removing anything that might seem promotional. Anyway the update is not geared to be promotional, it's purpose is to actually update the biography and keep Wikipedia content up to date. Please let me know if this is ok. Thank you.
Dcgavril (
talk) 14:13, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Much better, thanks -REDACTED403 (talk) 14:16, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have just published a updated version, removing anything that might seem promotional. Anyway the update is not geared to be promotional, it's purpose is to actually update the biography and keep Wikipedia content up to date. Please let me know if this is ok. Thank you.
Dcgavril (
talk) 14:13, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- courtesy ping @
Dcgavril
-REDACTED403
(talk) 13:57, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry bout the photo revert, that was a byproduct of how my software works. That should be fine to add back in as long as the photo is in public domain. I definitely don't have an issue with you specifically, check my contribution history to see the amount of edits I work with. Have a nice night :)
-REDACTED403
(talk) 13:56, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- I understand what you are saying, I will remove the "innovator" mention and send a new edit, but you've even reverted even the simple photo update, it seems more of an issue with me and not the updates themselves, so even if you are pointing out some ways to write a biography it is not fair what you've done as I'm also losing time improving the content on Wikipedia.
Dcgavril (
talk) 13:48, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
my edit on the incorrectly titled "kingdom of the planet of the apes" was correct as the film is indeed in fact called "rise of the kingdom of the planet of the apes" 2001:56A:F080:3E00:AC48:B226:BDF6:3C20 ( talk) 04:47, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, but you are wrong - the movie isn't called that. -REDACTED403 (talk) 08:31, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
The information I put in was deemed unneutral but this information I posted was just information that would better help to understand Shorts Brewing company and their mission as well as include more information about them. I would like the information to be re included. Bosshause ( talk) 12:49, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- @
Bosshause Wikipedia isn't the place for that kind of promotional and non neutral language. Do you work for the brewing company?
-REDACTED403
(talk) 12:53, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- No I am currently trying to do an assignment for college where I add information to a Wikipedia article. What is making you think it is non neutral? I can always edit this to better help fit the standards.
Bosshause (
talk) 13:07, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- If you're doing this for an assignment, you would've gotten a poor mark from what you added before. We can definitely improve it though, please read the
guidelines on POV fully and have another go. Leave me another message if you have any questions.
-REDACTED403
(talk) 13:17, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- I read over the NPOV stuff and it seems I was within guidelines. who determines what is or is not neutral? Is there anyway you can allow someone else to determine if it is not neutral? The information I included did not seem to have a bias for the company. It is just quotes from websites about the company and using them does not seem to make me feel as though I am being bias. Maybe I am wrong, but the information is true and helps provide information on the company.
Bosshause (
talk) 13:34, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry I am currently in bed, /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:Teahouse is great for helping and getting answers from a few people at once. Goodnight -REDACTED403 (talk) 13:40, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- I read over the NPOV stuff and it seems I was within guidelines. who determines what is or is not neutral? Is there anyway you can allow someone else to determine if it is not neutral? The information I included did not seem to have a bias for the company. It is just quotes from websites about the company and using them does not seem to make me feel as though I am being bias. Maybe I am wrong, but the information is true and helps provide information on the company.
Bosshause (
talk) 13:34, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- If you're doing this for an assignment, you would've gotten a poor mark from what you added before. We can definitely improve it though, please read the
guidelines on POV fully and have another go. Leave me another message if you have any questions.
-REDACTED403
(talk) 13:17, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- No I am currently trying to do an assignment for college where I add information to a Wikipedia article. What is making you think it is non neutral? I can always edit this to better help fit the standards.
Bosshause (
talk) 13:07, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
I have no idea who you are, nor why you have the authority to revoke changes made on this site. You sent a message that informed me that you revoked a change I made on Kirk Douglas's page because he is a "living person."
Kirk Douglas is dead. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:1c2:1b80:530:49e8:7faf:dc1e:51c0 ( talk) -REDACTED403 (talk) 00:37, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- @ 2601:1c2:1b80:530:49e8:7faf:dc1e:51c0 Apologies, my warning didn't properly apply to your edit. However, there already is a section on the alleged rape, and your edit was definitively saying he raped her, when that doesn't seem to be the conclusion the rest of the article makes. Again, sorry for confusing him as alive. -REDACTED403 (talk) 00:45, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
I was adding in my sources after putting my writing in but didn't get the chance because now I can't edit. Is there a way I can edit it again I need this turned in for my grade. Thank you. Nebbiethechihuaua ( talk) 13:53, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- You should be able to go to the edit history and re add your content with sources. I'm not aware of anything stopping you from editing right now. However, the way your additions are written doesn't seem very encyclopaedic in style to me, so they may be undone by someone else if they feel the same. -REDACTED403 (talk) 13:58, 30 April 2024 (UTC)