I made link on the user's (your) page, so it is easier to find. Initial comments:
- The writing and structure seem good. I changed the heading to be more in line with wiki standards, and added a references section. * If the article was created now, it would certainly attract templates about inline citations and wikifiying. To avoid these:
- more incline citations should be added that confirm the information given (from webstes or from books. If using print sources, please give the author, title, publisher, page numbers and ISBN number if possible); and
- link words to other wiki pages, especially uncommon nouns or complicated words, words that can be linked to interested related articles and certainly any foreign words like Oud. To make wikilinks, simply place double square brackets around a word like [[this]].
- Consider using an infobox. The easiest way is to find one on another person article, and copy it across, changing the entries for each field. Some projects insist on them, and some dislike them - i'm not sure what the WP:Composers project thinks.
- To upload a image: 1) save it to your desktop. 2) Click on "upload file" in the menu to the left. 3) Browse to Select the file. 4) Give the file a simple unique name, preferably one that could be found by searching the persons name. 5)Select a license from the drop-down list (there is one for album covers i think). 6) Write a "fair use rational". This means giving reasons why the image is needed for that particular page.
The WP:Composers talk page should be able to give you more specific advice on composer pages, and have links to many other composer articles so you can see the standards expected. They may even be able to help with article writing and sourcing! :)
Good job so far, hope you enjoy wikipedia and keep contributing. Yob Mod 20:06, 18 August 2009 (UTC)
Allah yirahamu, and thanks for sharing information about his life with the world. If you need help with anything, don't hesitate to ask. You can ask any editor (myself included) but you might also find WP:PALESTINE useful. Welcome to Wikipedia, and Ramadan Kareem. Tiamut talk 18:21, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
- I don't have the power to fix that (you need admin powers to do it when a page already existed there). We can ask any administrator for help. I know one who might like to know this page exists, so I 'll ask him. Tiamut talk 21:21, 24 August 2009 (UTC)
Thank you for uploading File:MohsenSubhiMawasem.jpg. However, it currently is missing information on its copyright status. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously. It may be deleted soon, unless we can determine the license and the source of the file. If you know this information, then you can add a copyright tag to the image description page.
If you have uploaded other files, consider checking that you have specified their license and tagged them, too. You can find a list of files you have uploaded by following this link.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask them at the media copyright questions page. Thanks again for your cooperation. Skier Dude ( talk) 07:54, 22 October 2009 (UTC)