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 The comment the reviewer left was:

Overciting in definition sentence. Please select no more than 3 references supporting the text.

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Gusfriend ( talk) 00:07, 19 May 2022 (UTC) reply

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Tol were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

Still the same problem. 39 references for one thing is ridiculous.

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Tol ( talk | contribs) @ 03:08, 19 May 2022 (UTC) reply

It appears that you may have a conflict of interest with the subject of Marilyn Murray, and as such you should submit this article to be published through the Articles for Creation process. Before editing the article further, please first disclose on your user page and on the article's Talk page whether you have received money to write this or other articles on Wikipedia, or if you have any other kind of conflict of interest concerning the subject. I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. Before submitting, you should make sure that the article is fully compliant with Wikipedia’s neutrality and verifiability policies, as well as our notability guidelines. When you’re ready, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. This process is encouraged, but optional. If you choose not to participate in it, you can remove the AfC template and move the article back to mainspace. You should also consider reaching out to the Teahouse for additional feedback and aid from experienced editors. _signed, Rosguill ^talk 23:14, 25 October 2022 (UTC) reply

Thanks for this feedback. I have not been paid to write this article, nor do I have any personal connection beyond having received education on her and her work. During the process of learning about Marilyn Murray and her trauma model, I discovered that none of the information has been represented on Wikipedia and am seeking to change that fact so that others who are in the educational process might come across it more easily. Srhenderson ( talk) 01:23, 26 October 2022 (UTC) reply

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot ( talk) 04:02, 9 December 2022 (UTC) reply

Hello, Srhenderson. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, " Trauma Egg".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 02:48, 9 January 2023 (UTC) reply

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mattdaviesfsic was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

Only 2 secondary sources and largey unsourced

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Mattdaviesfsic ( talk) 08:13, 10 January 2023 (UTC) reply

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Marilyn Murray. Thanks! Greenman ( talk) 07:38, 8 April 2023 (UTC) reply

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

The sources are insufficient to establish notability per WP:GNG, and too much of the content remains unreferenced.

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DoubleGrazing ( talk) 13:16, 18 April 2023 (UTC) reply

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sionk was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

The Moscow Times article is interesting and useful. Considering Murray's age there might be further offline news/book coverage. But we'd need to see some evidence of that.

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Sionk ( talk) 18:09, 2 October 2023 (UTC) reply

How would I show that data? Citing the physical materials? I wasn't sure that would fly since much of it cannot be easily Googled to verify. Srhenderson ( talk) 04:39, 14 November 2023 (UTC) reply

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot ( talk) 19:06, 3 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Srhenderson. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, " Marilyn Murray".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 17:54, 2 April 2024 (UTC) reply