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Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
Don't see the special characters anywhere, but done. RJaguar3 |
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t 11:12, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
Corrected one example of vagueness. RJaguar3 |
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t 11:12, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
The script has spotted the following contractions: DON'T, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
Fixed. It was inside a comment. RJaguar3 |
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t 11:12, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
As far as I know, this is done. RJaguar3 |
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t 11:12, 9 May 2008 (UTC)