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The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:23, 1 December 2017 (UTC)
Created by
Yunshui (
talk). Self-nominated at 10:13, 27 October 2017 (UTC).
QPQ done, new enough, in time, free of copyright problems, long enough, source checks out, hook is interesting. Would prefer if we go with ALT1 . This is good to go.
FITINDIA 11:16, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but I think you could do more with the hook. Calling him "acclaimed" without telling us what he did looks like puffery. Perhaps you could work something around his founding "off-loop" theater?
Yoninah (
talk) 12:49, 3 November 2017 (UTC)
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Yunshui: sorry, I don't see why ALT2 is hooky; it just sounds sad. I looked at the New York Times source and see that you wrote a very start-class article, leaving out a lot of good information. I added some of that from the New York Times, and suggest: