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The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk) 20:27, 7 August 2020 (UTC)
... that when making the music video for her song "Cardigan",
Taylor Swift did her own makeup, hair, and styling, and a medical inspector supervised COVID-19 health and safety guidelines, such as
social distancing and the wearing of masks?
Rolling Stone
... that when making the music video for her song "Cardigan",
Taylor Swift did her own makeup, hair, and styling, and an onsite medical inspector supervised COVID-19 health and safety guidelines?
Rolling Stone
Overall: Shuipzv3 As a Swiftie I love both hooks, but as a reviewer ALT1 seems to be far more interesting. However, I think it should be rephrased to make the point clearer, and the hook should indicate Aaron Dessner is a cowriter.
Corachow (
talk) 16:12, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
Shuipzv3 I don't think this works either, please add ALT2 when you propose a new hook. Also, on ALT0, it's "an onsite medical inspector" not "a onsite medical inspector".
Corachow (
talk) 11:05, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
Shuipzv3 That's better, though I think the word "wrote" can be replaced with "completed" or "finished". I also added a bold link to the song title.
Corachow (
talk) 13:25, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
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Corachow: Of course, thank you. I was hesitant to use "completed" or "finished" because I don't know if what she wrote was the final product. As in, if there were any edits after. I considered "adapted" but thought "wrote" is succinct enough. You might have a point though.
Shuipzv3 (
talk) 13:33, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
Shuipzv3 I see your point, then ALT3 should be fine. I crossed out the hooks that are not approved. I far prefer ALT3, though ALT0 can be an alternative.
Corachow (
talk) 13:36, 1 August 2020 (UTC)