Breaking Through (2022 film)

• ... that in order to embody her acting role as a short-track speed skater in the movie Breaking Through, actress Meng Meiqi inserted a rock in one of her ice skates in order to feel real pain?

• ALT1: ... that the 2022 Chinese sports drama movie Breaking Through was shot in Northeast China at temperatures of −10 °C (14 °F)? Source: 《我心飞扬》曝海报 孟美岐领衔“四朵金花”冲金
• ALT2: ... that for her role as short-track speed skater in the movie Breaking Through, actress Meng Meiqi gained a weight of 15 kg (33 lb) in order to be closer in terms of physique of a short-track speed skater? Source: 《我心飞扬》曝海报 孟美岐领衔“四朵金花”冲金
• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Daniel Chapo

Toadboy123 ( talk) 11:43, 6 June 2024 (UTC).

• Full review is to follow (spot check seems to check out though for newness and length), but before the review continues, I would suggest that the article be given a copyedit. The first hook is probably the best option here. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 03:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
  • @ Narutolovehinata5: Sure. Do let me know what copyedit I should do for the article. Toadboy123 ( talk) 18:49, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Both the Production and Pre-publicity and release sections are the ones in need of copyediting. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 23:12, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

@ Narutolovehinata5: So I have completed the copyedit on the stated sections. Do let me know how it is? Toadboy123 ( talk) 13:27, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

There are still multiple grammatical issues and weird wordings in the article, such as "Winter Olympic Games but lose opportunity to win the gold medal" and "In order to present the best effect of Olympic athlete." I'll see if I can ask another editor to give this a copyedit, either Bruxton or Launchballer. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 08:59, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

I can take a look at this.-- Laun chba ller 09:01, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

I took out a number of clauses which were either tautologous or too nebulous to mean anything useful. I note that WP:UPSD highlights refs #6, #7, and #18 in yellow and wonder what makes them reliable, and I suggest that the single-sentence #Soundtrack section should either be expanded or merged.-- Laun chba ller 06:41, 2 July 2024 (UTC)