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Better Off Dead?

Moved to mainspace by Sdrqaz ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

Sdrqaz ( talk) 03:12, 7 June 2024 (UTC).

  • no issues with the article. original hook is bad, taking a quote out of context. alt1 is boring. alt2 is confusing, and made me think that there was a hotline you could call in the documentary. ltb d l ( talk) 02:07, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
    Rating this article as a Start seems ... pretty low (is it " developing but still quite incomplete"?). If I may be frank, this review is seems a little harsh. ALT0 was not taken out of context: the reviewer is saying that the documentary was funny, no (see the quote)? I don't know how to address the charge of ALT1 being boring (I thought that something being unnerving and making a reviewer regret watching was interesting), and as for ALT2, I don't really follow: I believe that they did call the hotline in the documentary. Sdrqaz ( talk) 14:54, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
    of course the review is harsh, this is going on the main page. as for alt2, the wording is unclear. perhaps say something like "they call an automated hotline"? ltb d l ( talk) 16:35, 12 June 2024 (UTC)