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Pamzeis: Good article, but I feel like a better hook could be made here.
Onegreatjoke (
talk) 03:11, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
Would any of these alternatives:
ALT3: ... that La La Land's composer initially wanted "Audition (The Fools Who Dream)" to be the film's "award song" instead of "City of the Stars"?
[2]
ALT4: ... that a journalist said La La Land's "Audition (The Fools Who Dream)" features "the world's most accommodating key change, the equivalent of going half a speed faster on a treadmill"?
[3]
ALT5: ... that "Audition" signifies how La La Land is "back in old-musical Heaven"?
[4]
ALT6: ... that La La Land's "Audition" takes place after a long absence of musical numbers, signifying how the film is "back in old-musical Heaven"?
[5]
work? Lemme know what you think!
Pamzeis (
talk) 11:13, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
ooh, I love La La Land! I'm learning all the pieces on piano :) going to say no to ALT5, as it looks like it expresses an opinion in wikivoice; of the choices presented, I think ALTs 0 or 3 are best. Pinging
Onegreatjoke for a final call.
theleekycauldron (
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contribs) (she/her) 22:34, 15 July 2023 (UTC)