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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 ( talk · contribs) 14:59, 3 October 2020 (UTC) reply


I'll take a look at this one. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 14:59, 3 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Crewe Alexandra

  • "He returned to the division in 2006–07 with Barrow". Could we get some clarification as to what the division was.
  • Done.-- Echetus Xe 16:56, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply
  • "He made three further appearances from the bench during the rest of the season, all three games ending in defeat." Needs a reference.
  • Done.-- Echetus Xe 16:56, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply
  • "His ten league goals reflected good value for his seventeen league starts, and additional nine appearances from the bench." This also need referencing.
  • Done.-- Echetus Xe 16:56, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Rotherham United

  • "and did not feature in the "Millers"' defeat in the play-off Final due to a metatarsal injury." Ref needed.
  • Done.-- Echetus Xe 16:56, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Port Vale

  • "and Pope finished on 33 goals in 51 games." Ref needed.
  • Done.-- Echetus Xe 16:56, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply
  • "He ended the 2013–14 campaign as the club's top-scorer with 16 goals in 51 appearances". Ref needed.
  • Done.-- Echetus Xe 16:56, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Return to Port Vale

  • " to help Vale to pick up back-to-back wins for the first time in over a year". This needs a reference.
I just removed the first time in a year part as it's not important and the rest is in the reference.-- Echetus Xe 13:55, 10 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Personal life

  • Refs 114, 115, and 116 don't seem to be working. Whenever I click on them it just takes me to a page saying Service Unavailable - DNS failure. Could alternative references be found if possible?
I did the wayback machine for all the dead links so they should be archived now.-- Echetus Xe 21:31, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply

References

  • Ref 4 doesn't seem to be working. Could an alternative be found.
I did the wayback machine for all the dead links so they should be archived now.-- Echetus Xe 21:31, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Ref 19 is no longer available on YouTube.
I removed it.-- Echetus Xe 21:31, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Comments

I think there it a bit of work to be done here so I'm putting this review on hold. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 10:35, 4 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Okay thanks!-- Echetus Xe 21:31, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply
Looks like we're almost done here. Once the last issue has been addressed I think this will be ready to pass. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 09:52, 9 October 2020 (UTC) reply
Ah yeah, I forgot about that one.-- Echetus Xe 13:55, 10 October 2020 (UTC) reply
OK then, looks like we're done here. Congrats. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 15:09, 11 October 2020 (UTC) reply

May I note one further problem?

The results of a Google search for -

Tom Pope - Port Vale

- return teaser text that says -

Current teams: Crewe Alexandra F.C.

Clearly this should be Port Vale F.C., but I cannot find the erroneous teaser text anywhere within the article text.

Glenn Oliver ( talk) 13:03, 24 December 2020 (UTC) reply