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the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct; and
it complies with the
Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation; still there were some grammar inconsistencies and ambiguities and even a serious outright error when the university was confused with an U.S. state, still, this error was easy to fix and I fixed it and all other grammar errors I found
reliable sources are cited inline, or must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph -- the exception is the lead section, in accordance with
WP:LEAD;
it contains no original research; and
it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism; although there were many similarities. The highest level of similarities triggered by the Earwig's Copyvio Detector online tool and the Copyleaks online service was related to the page
[1], but I addressed this issue and the alert should no longer be triggered, it is 5.4% similarity by Copyleaks, still Copyvio may trigger false alarms on long names such as university departments
Broad in its coverage:
it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and
it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see
summary style).
Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each; still, I'm not sure about possible conflict of interest: if that is the case, then
User:West Virginian should disclose it according to the rules stipulated in
WP:COI; if it is not the case, I still urge
User:West Virginian to declare on the article's talk page that there is no conflict of interest as this notion is explained on
WP:COI
Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
Illustrated:
media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content; and
media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
Overall result: pass. The questions I addressed at the
#Reviewer's opinion section would not prevent the article to pass the criteria check.
Maxim Masiutin (
talk) 04:27, 22 November 2023 (UTC)reply
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