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How about having 4 pics in the lead?

I mean a format like in Sustainable energy but different pics.

For example one of the pics could be hydropower and one biomass.

Graphs are very good (especially those made by @ RCraig09:), and indeed I have put many in other articles, but I feel they belong in the body of the article where readers are thinking more deeply. The lead needs the more instant understanding of pictures I think Chidgk1 ( talk) 13:31, 13 March 2023 (UTC) reply

I agree with you 100%. The 2 x 2 image collages work really well for this type of article. Please go ahead and set one up. :-) EMsmile ( talk) 14:31, 13 March 2023 (UTC) reply
Concentrated solar power parabolic troughs in the distance arranged in rectangles shining on a flat plain with snowy mountains in the background
Wind turbines beside a red dirt road
The Three Gorges Dam on the Yangtze River in China
Biomass plant in Scotland.
Examples of renewable energy options. Clockwise from top left: concentrated solar power with molten salt heat storage in Spain; wind energy in South Africa; Biomass plant in Scotland; The Three Gorges Dam on the Yangtze River in China
Coming back to this suggestion from March. If we have a 2 x 2 image collage, which 4 images should it feature? I suggest:

The aim would also be to have a mixture of large scale and small scale, and a mixture of Global North and Global South countries. Right? Anything else to consider? To get the discussion rolling, I have made a suggested collage, see on the right. EMsmile ( talk) 10:32, 27 June 2023 (UTC) reply

Should “ Trends for individual technologies” be deleted?

I think it should because the best place for this stuff is in the articles for each individual technology Chidgk1 ( talk) 15:43, 13 March 2023 (UTC) reply

Well, I wouldn't delete it but move it, right? Unless the texts are completely useless? I think if they are good summary type statements then they could be moved up to the section called "mainstream technologies" in the respective sub-sections. If it's regarded as too detailed then the text blocks could be moved to the sub-articles on the individual technologies. EMsmile ( talk) 10:05, 14 March 2023 (UTC) reply
OK, I've made this change now, i.e. moved content to the respective sections within the "mainstream technologies" section. I have also dissolved the gallery section and moved those images up. EMsmile ( talk) 11:28, 27 June 2023 (UTC) reply

Needs a bit of culling?

I think the article is on the long side (50 kB (7750 words) "readable prose size"). Who has ideas in which sections some culling and condensing, or moving to sub-articles, could take place? For example, one section could be the one on solar power which is probably a bit too detailed now. Thoughts? EMsmile ( talk) 11:31, 27 June 2023 (UTC) reply

@ EMsmile and anyone else
Perhaps we could delete or move out the photovoltaic development subsection? Chidgk1 ( talk) 16:57, 10 February 2024 (UTC) reply
Yes please. Move it to one of the sub-articles, I'd say. I've also added the section size table at the top of the talk page now. It helps to identify which sections are perhaps too big and dominant compared to others. The section on hydropower also seems too long. EMsmile ( talk) 17:10, 10 February 2024 (UTC) reply

Too many sidebars?

Regarding this recent edit, I find that the article now has too many sidebars and that they take up "prime property" space at the very start of the article: We have a side bar on sustainable energy, one on renewable energy and one on climate change mitigation. I think that is too much and cloggs up valuable article space. I would recommend to cut it down to one (the renewable energy sidebar) and/or to move the sidebar(s) more towards the end of the article. EMsmile ( talk) 08:22, 17 July 2023 (UTC) reply

Agree in principle. However, I'd retain the "Sustainable energy" sidebar because it contains "Renewable energy" as a part of it. I'd eliminate the other two, because these sidebars relate to entire topics/articles and not just particular sections. — RCraig09 ( talk) 16:52, 17 July 2023 (UTC) reply
Agreed and done. :-) EMsmile ( talk) 07:59, 18 July 2023 (UTC) reply

Intro image (graph)

I am afraid that the introductory image is not very appropriate for the article - the graph is only about electricity, and the problem is that it is about "power capacity." This means for renewables, the peak capacity is very different from the peak capacity of fossil production. Jirka Dl ( talk) 10:43, 20 September 2023 (UTC) reply

Capacity (uploaded 13 February)
Production (uploaded 2 October 2023)
The graphic shows how the capacity of renewable energy is growing, and for fossil fuels is waning. I don't understand the meaning or relevance of your sentence re "peak capacity". — RCraig09 ( talk) 15:50, 20 September 2023 (UTC) reply
Hi @ RCraig09, I am afraid that there is a huge difference in "power capacity" versus "power production" - or "electricity production" - compare this graph with "electricity production" graph here or "energy production" graph here (use "Relative" box to see the share. Our graph looks too much optimistic. Especially for FV - in my country (Czech Republic) the average real kW production of FV panel is about 10 % of its power capacity. The graph is correct (but in description it should be mentioned that the graph is about electricity, not primary power), but I do not think that it should be as first on the page. Do not take my comments wrong, I am in favor of renewables very much :-) Jirka Dl ( talk) 18:56, 20 September 2023 (UTC) reply
Thank you, User:Jirka Dl. I have added a sentence of explanation to the chart's caption. But I will also look for a better chart. I have created several renewable energy charts, shown in the "Alternative/renewable/green energy/transition" section of my Wikimedia Commons user page, which you are welcome to view. — RCraig09 ( talk) 20:04, 20 September 2023 (UTC) reply
User:Jirka Dl, I've created a new chart, File:1990- Renewable energy production, by source.svg, that shows production. I think this chart takes care of your concerns.
Separately, I'm puzzled by the chart in the section "Renewables break new records but growth slows" in this Ember page. It shows capacity (GW) as much less than generation (TW). That representation seems backward. — RCraig09 ( talk) 05:08, 2 October 2023 (UTC) reply
Watch out: Gigawatts->giga+"watts" measure power (in this case "theoretical installed "capacity" of the plants). While Terawatt-hour->tera+"watt-hour" is a measure of energy (how much energy the plants actually produce basically). {{u| Gtoffoletto}} talk 10:43, 8 November 2023 (UTC) reply
@ RCraig09 The "production" graph is quite clear (didn't check if units are accurate) and shows the exponential growth of renewables (although it doesn't show how they compare to non renewables). However there is another imprecision: energy and electric energy are not the same thing. Energy = electric energy (electricity) + other forms of energy for transport etc. The source of the data refers to electricity while the graph talks about energy. {{u| Gtoffoletto}} talk 11:24, 8 November 2023 (UTC) reply

@ Gtoffoletto:
— I'm not following exactly which change(s) you think should be made (I assume it's the "...production" graphic shown here). Is it "Renewable energy production" ---> "Electricity production" ?
— Pinging User:Jirka Dl for comments. — RCraig09 ( talk) 17:19, 8 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Yes ”Renewable electricity production” would make sense. Consider that graph does not include all renewable energy: something like Solar water heating is a kind of renewable energy which is not “electricity”. {{u| Gtoffoletto}} talk 08:20, 9 November 2023 (UTC) reply
Version 2, with revised title, has been uploaded. Thanks for your input. — RCraig09 ( talk) 16:55, 9 November 2023 (UTC) reply
Thank you. I don’t see it yet in the article though. It still says “energy” {{u| Gtoffoletto}} talk 19:18, 9 November 2023 (UTC) reply
You'll have to Wikipedia:Bypass your cache when you refresh the screen. — RCraig09 ( talk) 21:47, 9 November 2023 (UTC) reply
Thanks! I've aligned the caption. {{u| Gtoffoletto}} talk 23:34, 9 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Possible additional charts

Should we also include the "Capacity" graph in the article somewhere? And should we consider showing all other electricity sources in the Production graph? We might consider a graph showing "all renewables" together vs. other sources (oil, coal, gas, nuclear etc. separated) to show the relative share? {{u| Gtoffoletto}} talk 11:09, 10 November 2023 (UTC) reply

@ Gtoffoletto: You might want to look at the ~29 renewable energy charts I've uploaded, shown on my Wikimedia Commons page (expand the collapsible text). There are already some "capacity" charts in this article; maybe more charts are appropriate. — RCraig09 ( talk) 17:15, 10 November 2023 (UTC) reply

Wiki Education assignment: Research Process and Methodology - FA23 - Sect 201 - Thu

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Hello, is it okay for me to edit the conversion error under drivers and benefit section?

It's supposed to be 35.6 degrees Fahrenheit Cherrycoke5 ( talk) 01:26, 27 January 2024 (UTC) reply

Sorry I cannot see that error - maybe you or someone else already fixed it. In general the answer is yes - see Wikipedia:BOLD, revert, discuss cycle Chidgk1 ( talk) 16:38, 10 February 2024 (UTC) reply

Scope of the article?

Do you think Passive daytime radiative cooling is in scope?

Do you think hydrogen is in scope? Chidgk1 ( talk) 16:41, 10 February 2024 (UTC) reply

More excerpts?

Should we excerpt more here, either from main articles or from Sustainable energy which is a featured article, for example wind power? Might make it easier to keep up to date. Chidgk1 ( talk) 17:07, 10 February 2024 (UTC) reply

Wiki Education assignment: Geographies of Energy and Sustainability

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Correction

Solve the error in reference 3, please Graph8389 ( talk) 03:51, 15 March 2024 (UTC) reply