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Reviewer: Keilana ( talk · contribs) 16:38, 5 April 2012 (UTC) reply

Will actually do the review when I'm on a better computer (around 4-5 hours from now) Keilana| ^{Parlez ici} 16:38, 5 April 2012 (UTC) reply

This article looks great! I just saw a couple minor things that could be fixed.

• Why does your first reference show up as "nb 1"?

• It is actually a note and not a reference-- 12george1 ( talk) 20:19, 7 April 2012 (UTC) reply
  • OK, I found it to be kind of awkward. Maybe it would be less awkward if you either put a simple explanation in parentheses (e.g. "it re-strengthened into a major hurricane (above Category 3) on September 28) or just linked to the relevant section of Saffir-Simpson scale. Keilana| ^{Parlez ici} 04:24, 8 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Do you need to put "SST's" in parentheses? If you do, then it should be "SSTs" because it's a plural.

• Fixed-- 12george1 ( talk) 20:19, 7 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• "it restrengthen into a major hurricane" should be "it restrengthened into a major hurricane"

• Fixed-- 12george1 ( talk) 20:19, 7 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• "very cold could tops", did you mean "cloud tops"?

• Fixed-- 12george1 ( talk) 20:19, 7 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Throughout the article, I would find it helpful to have more wikilinks. I don't have a background in meteorology, so when you're using the terminology (which is great), I have to look all sorts of things up, and I think the average reader would have to do the same.

• Can you name any specific terms you would like wikilinked?-- 12george1 ( talk) 20:19, 7 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Stuff like "convection", "wind shear", "tropospheric", "anticyclone", etc. Keilana| ^{Parlez ici} 04:24, 8 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Fixed-- 12george1 ( talk) 17:52, 8 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Did the UK do anything to prepare for the storm? If so, that would be useful information.

• Probably not. Usually locations do not prepare for a storm if it is already extratropical.-- 12george1 ( talk) 20:19, 7 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Then that's all good. :) Keilana| ^{Parlez ici} 04:24, 8 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• This is quite well sourced. Nice job!

I'll keep an eye on this page, and can't wait to see it get promoted! :) You did excellent work here. Keilana| ^{Parlez ici} 15:19, 7 April 2012 (UTC) reply

One more thing I noticed: in the last sentence, you don't need to say "a bird called the" about the blue-winged warbler. It would be way less clunky if you said something like "After Isaac passed the British Isles, a Blue-winged Warbler was seen for the first time in Europe." Keilana| ^{Parlez ici} 04:24, 8 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Fixed this, too-- 12george1 ( talk) 17:52, 8 April 2012 (UTC) reply

Then in that case, I have no qualms about promoting this. :) Keilana| ^{Parlez ici} 18:06, 8 April 2012 (UTC) reply