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Arsenikk
(talk) 13:05, 28 December 2010 (UTC)
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- Words like "forge" and "depot" need to be wikilinked (done)
- In English, buildings are not drawn, but designed (fixed)
- As the article is called "Homansbyen Depot", I've changed many instances of "Kristiania Sporveisanlæg" to that
- In the first paragraph of "facilities", all the sentences start with "the". Try varying a bit more.
- Stick in commas (not spaces) to separate thousands (e.g. 12,000)
- Links should only be linked once, unless very far from each other (i.e. much longer articles than this)
- Try to avoid very short paragraphs. Single-sentence paragraphs are never acceptable, and preferably they should be at least four sentences or so.
I've fixed everything I came across, so I'm granting a "good article" status. Congratulations!
Arsenikk
(talk) 13:05, 28 December 2010 (UTC)
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- Thanks! --
Eisfbnore
talk 14:44, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
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