I will review this article. Thank you. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 08:03, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply
General
Change the reference publishers which are named "Superhero Hype!" to "CraveOnline" as the former is a redirect to the latter. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 08:36, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
References #64, #66, #69, #71, #73, #75-76, #79, #82 and #133-135 are from social networking sites. Find newspaper sources which mention them and replace the references I have mentioned here. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 13:01, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
All of those sources, and how they are used, are permissible per
WP:SOCIALMEDIA. -
Favre1fan93 (
talk) 18:42, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
Oh, I see. Then let the references be. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 05:12, 4 February 2015 (UTC)reply
For ref no #253 can you insert the name of the publisher, which is missing. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 10:18, 4 February 2015 (UTC)reply
"and the supporting cast was filled out over the next several months." — Can you rephrase it as "and the supporting cast members were subsequently confirmed."? This would suffice.
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Ssven2speak 2 me 08:17, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply
@
TriiipleThreat: Actually, "the next several months" sounds a little vague in terms of detail. That's why.
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Ssven2speak 2 me 08:36, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
Well laid out. Can you, by any chance, try and trim it further? I managed to do a c/e for it and brought it down to 698 words from 716. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 09:23, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply
We generally try to keep the plot section around/under 700 words, so unless there is anything you specifically have noticed, I don't think there is any real need to trim it further. -
adamstom97 (
talk) 09:07, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
Not a big deal but fine nevertheless. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 09:27, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
Cast
Nothing much here. But is "Stitch Kingdom" reliable? —
Ssven2speak 2 me 05:14, 4 February 2015 (UTC)reply
As far as I know, yes. We have been using it on several other articles a bit recently as well. -
adamstom97 (
talk) 08:43, 4 February 2015 (UTC)reply
Production
Development
"and one featuring the full team" — replace "full" with "entire". —
Ssven2speak 2 me 09:23, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply
"was offered several of their lesser known properties to base a screenplay on." — Source? —
Ssven2speak 2 me 09:23, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply
Ref #94 is the source. Let me know if you'd like an additional tag there, or a slight reword. -
Favre1fan93 (
talk) 22:19, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply
You can place the "ref name" thing beside that sentence. An additional tag using the same ref no #94. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 08:06, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
The Slate source is just reprinting the quote from Film Divider. Why not just use the direct source? -
Favre1fan93 (
talk) 22:19, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply
Slate is more reliable. I recommend you use that as it has an article on Wikipedia. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 08:06, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
I understand what your thinking, but we always use the original source, rather than an article referencing another article. And just because it doesn't have a page on Wikipedia, doesn't necessarily mean it isn't reliable. -
adamstom97 (
talk) 09:07, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
Well, if that's the case then ok. The matter is settled. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 09:27, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
The section has a lot of quotes. Can you explain what Gunn says rather than just paste the quote? You can create a quotebox for one of them as well. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 09:23, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply
"In May, Marvel offered John C. Reilly the role of Rhomann Dey." — Where's the source for this sentence? —
Ssven2speak 2 me 08:36, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
"were polishing the script." — can be rephrased as "were providing the finishing touches to the script." —
Ssven2speak 2 me 08:36, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
"On casting Brolin, Feige said, "We reached out to him and it was one of those things that does not happen all the time but when it does it’s very nice, where he was totally intrigued. He was a fan of what we did, he met with Jeremy Latcham in a hotel in London and learned about the characters a little bit. I spoke to him on the phone a few times. We ran it by James who loved it, ran it by Joss [Whedon] who loved it because Thanos is in this universe because of Avengers. Then we shot him and recorded for it." — This would serve better as a quote in a quotebox.
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Ssven2speak 2 me 12:19, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
I used a blockquote instead, so that it can be read inline with the other Thanos / Brolin info. -
adamstom97 (
talk) 09:21, 4 February 2015 (UTC)reply
The last paragraph has some big quotes. Explain them rather than just pasting the quote. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 12:19, 3 February 2015 (UTC)reply
I'm not sure if the footage of baby Groot dancing qualifies as a post-credits scene; the one with Howard the Duck only is. Moreover,
the source does not describe the scene as being "post-credits".
Kailash29792 (
talk) 09:45, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply
"Total Film noted how the opening clip was reminiscent of Raiders of the Lost Ark, which Gunn stated was a big influence for Guardians" can be rephrased as "Total Film noted the similarity of the trailer's opening clip to the 1981 film, Raiders of the Lost Ark, which Gunn stated was a big influence for Guardians of the Galaxy." —
Ssven2speak 2 me 09:32, 4 February 2015 (UTC)reply
There isn't much changes to be made in the "Critical reception" and "Box office" sections and also the "Sequel" section looks good. —
Ssven2speak 2 me 10:18, 4 February 2015 (UTC)reply