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Interesting entry needing rewrite

I noticed this entry when its subject was added to the list of Yale University people. It's potentially a very interesting piece, but desperately needs rewriting in a style consistent with normal English usage here. I'll try to get to it, but it'd be better if rewritten by someone more familiar with the subject matter. MarmadukePercy ( talk) 10:51, 1 February 2011 (UTC) reply