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I noticed that the tourism and sport section consist of bullet pointed lists and I see that this has been criticised in the past. I think that it might be a good idea to transfer theses lists over to new pages (e.g Sport in Auckland) so that these sections can be rewritten in an encyclopedic format. MangoMan11 ( talk) 05:44, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
The lede currently describes Auckland as being recognised as one of the world's most liveable cities and provides two sources, the Economist global liveability index and the Mercer Quality of Living index. Having had a look at the Economist index in particular,it is not at all cross-cultural and heavily based on US values. The way the sentence is presented makes it sounds like the entire world thinks our city among the most liveable whereas the sources suggest more that it's mostly the western world thinking as such (and that is debatable as well). In any case I don't think there is sufficient evidence to make that statement about Auckland. I also don't think it is particularly helpful as we should not assume knowledge about US/western values from readers. Furthermore, as we cannot expect readers to know how liveability is judged in these rankings, they have little meaning and have an increased potential to mislead.
An example of a measure used for the Economist index is "discomfort of climate for travellers". Obviously to a degree what is comfortable depends on what you are used to. So are these travellers used to monsoons? Probably not, they probably mean American travellers. Another measure showing strong US bias is "availability of private healthcare" and private education. Even if a city has good education, but not good private options, it will have a lower ranking. Yes, making a ranking that captures everyone's ideas of liveability is hard if not impossible and for that reason they should probably be avoided from articles about cities. Philipp.governale ( talk) 14:00, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
The article refers to "Asians" quite a bit. I know we have this terminology come up in the media often, but is it a legit ethnic group? Asia is a very big continent with quite a few radically different cultures - Middle East, South East Asia, China, India, etc. I notice that Sydney has a finer grained breakdown and the word "Asian" is not used at all - Demographics_of_Sydney.
Is there any particular reason not to break it down for Auckland? Anon 21:15, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
The photos on this page are fricking amazing! Like seriously legit good stuff, speaking for myself as a really, really bad photo taker person...
What do people think about maybe adding a photo of one of the food storage pits on Maungawhau? Or anything else that acknowledges the pre-European inhabitants of this land? 121.98.194.41 ( talk) 09:39, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
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Nominator: SageWikiPro ( talk · contribs) 08:48, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Phlsph7 ( talk · contribs) 08:30, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello
SageWikiPro and thanks for the nomination. Unfortunately, the article fails
criterion 2b since there are too many unreferenced paragraphs and 15 "citation needed" tags. Examples are the paragraphs starting with "In response to the ongoing rebellion by Hōne Heke in", "Several islands of the Hauraki Gulf are administered", and "Auckland Domain is one of the largest parks in the city". According to criterion 2b, these passages require inline citations "no later than the end of the paragraph". Other maintenance tags in the article include: 2x Update, 2x Expand section, 1x Multiple issues, 1x when?, 1x why?, and 1x permanent dead link. I suggest that you add all the relevant references and address the maintenance tags before a renomination. You might also consider a
peer review before another GA nomination.
A few other observations:
Eden Park stadium with statue of Rongomātāneadd an article before "statue"
Northern Mystics and Northern Stars are netball teams who competereplace "who" with "that"
North Shore Events Centre is an indoor arena which is usedreplace "which" with "that"
Vodafone Events Centre is an indoor arena which hosts a variety of eventsreplace "which" with "that"
Phlsph7 ( talk) 08:30, 13 April 2024 (UTC)