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This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 05:21, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
This article should be changed to 70 Pine Street from American International Building. AIG sold the building and they removed the name from the building. http://skyscrapercenter.com/new-york-city/70-pine-street/ Aausterm ( talk) 20:15, 3 May 2012 (UTC)
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5x expanded by Epicgenius ( talk). Self-nominated at 00:55, 4 April 2020 (UTC).
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Overall: ALT1 accepted AGF. – John M Wolfson ( talk • contribs) 01:33, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 10:08, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use Done, Fixed, Added, Not done, Doing..., or Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. – ♠Vami _IV†♠ 10:08, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
sun-inspired motifsConsider "solar motifs".
and enclosed private terraceAn enclosed private terrace.
70 Pine Street.
The building contains numerous setbacks on its exterior.How is something external contained?
The facade consists of Indiana Limestone on the lower stories, [...]This could be worded better. Maybe:
The facade of the lower stories is covered with Indiana limestone, [...]
An extensive lighting program, included possibly because of Cities Service's role as an energy provider, [...]You don't know for certain? "System" would be preferable instead of "program", too.
The building contains four primary entrances [...]Has four primary entrances.
Robert A. M. Stern wrote that [...]Who?
[...] with the widest section of the lobby near Pine Street, there is an information booth.Add a "where" before "there".
[...] composed of white and pink panels of marble [...]Consider "panels of white and pink marble".
and serves a variety of dishes such as white bean hummus, cavatelli, and charred octopus.Irrelevant.
and Chrysler Building.The Chrysler Building.
operating numerous companies the manufactured-gas and electric utility sectorsConfusing.
he formed the Pine Street Realty Company,Why does this need boldface?
at a total cost of $2 million [...] and cost $7,000,000.Inconsistent.
Cortlandt F. BishopWho is this man and why does he own part of 70 Pine Street?
References are reliable. – ♠Vami _IV†♠ 10:08, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
CopyVio scan revealed a 43.2% likelihood of duplication from this source, but investigating I found the damage to mostly be quotations and names. – ♠Vami _IV†♠ 10:08, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
Images are relevant to the article and free/tagged. – ♠Vami _IV†♠ 10:08, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
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