I'll review this article shortly.
Wizardman 17:23, 31 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Here are the issues I found:
"coming from behind to win 3–1 after dropping Game 1" I'd say three games to one (and later in the section three games to two), since I had to re-read it a couple times to realize it wasn't a score.
"This was done in an effort to pip the Cardinals to the NL Central division title, rather than simply settling for the wild card spot." Reads oddly; reword.
"seventh NLDS appearance in franchise history, since the permanent implementation" rm comma
Only a bit to fix; article on hold.
Wizardman 18:08, 31 January 2015 (UTC)reply
All 3 comments addressed. However, if you find the reworded sentence still awkward, I'm more than happy to change it again to something completely different. Thanks for the review! —
Bloom6132 (
talk) 17:42, 1 February 2015 (UTC)reply
I tweaked one of them, but otherwise everything looks good, so I'll pass the article.
Wizardman 22:03, 1 February 2015 (UTC)reply