Battle of Pentland Hills. is there a more specific battle you could link to here? perhaps
Battle of Rullion Green?
Based on the information available in the source, I believe that Battle of Rullion Green and the Battle of Pentland Hills are one in the same; however, I've left the phrasing as Battle of Pentland Hills with a link to the Battle of Rullion Green in order to stay true to the wording in the source. Let me know if this works! --
West Virginian (talk) 14:45, 3 April 2021 (UTC)reply
In January 1818, Armstrong was unanimously elected by whom? the public?
I am assuming he was elected by the public, but the source doesn't specify. Please let me know if this requires further elaboration in the meantime. --
West Virginian (talk) 14:45, 3 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Armstrong and John Kirk, and Armstrong's wife Jane and John Baker White perhaps add some commas such that Armstrong and John Kirk, and Armstrong's wife Jane and John Baker White becomes Armstrong and John Kirk, and Armstrong's wife, Jane, and John Baker White
I've rendered the sentence accordingly per your suggestion. Thank you! --
West Virginian (talk) 14:45, 3 April 2021 (UTC)reply
He relocated to New Creek Station (formerly Paddytown, present-day Keyser)[a] not sure you need the note for the third time.
What makes Historic Hampshire a reliable reference? It looks self-published.
What makes Munske & Kerns 2004 a reliable reference?
The Historic Hampshire and the Munske & Kerns 2004 books were both co-authored and published by local historians and subject matter experts in Hampshire County and in West Virginia. Both are based on reliable evidence and documentation. Please let me know if I can provide any additional information on these books in the meantime. --
West Virginian (talk) 14:56, 3 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Therapyisgood, thank you so much for your thorough and comprehensive review, and for your thoughtful and helpful suggestions and recommendations! I greatly appreciate your time and value your guidance and expertise. Please let me know if there are any outstanding issues with this article in the meantime. I am committed to ensuring that it meets all the criteria for GA. Thanks again, and my apologies for my delayed response to your review comments! --
West Virginian (talk) 14:56, 3 April 2021 (UTC)reply